First Things First
Disclaimer: This is pure fiction.
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Kamenashi Kazuya
Rating: PG
Betaed by: beltenebra and csad, who were a great help! Thank you again, ladies. :-)
Word count: A bit over 5,000 words.
Story notes: This is my help_pakistan story for the wonderful krysyuy, who wanted Junno/Kame and let me run with it. krysyuy, you've been very patient - I hope you think the ( Read more... )
Pairing: Taguchi Junnosuke / Kamenashi Kazuya
Rating: PG
Betaed by: beltenebra and csad, who were a great help! Thank you again, ladies. :-)
Word count: A bit over 5,000 words.
Story notes: This is my help_pakistan story for the wonderful krysyuy, who wanted Junno/Kame and let me run with it. krysyuy, you've been very patient - I hope you think the ( Read more... )
I was just on my way out when I refreshed the page and saw this. -EXCITED LIKE WHOA- Unfortunately, I really do have to go now, but I will totally leave proper flailing feedback later. ♥♥♥
-hugs!- Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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But seriously: Thank you for your patience and generosity! I really hope you enjoy this. (If not, don't hesitate to tell me! I take criticism well, and I mean it when I say I welcome all kinds of feedback.)
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And YES, I did enjoy it. Very, very, very much. This is totally the type of story I fall in love with. Sweet and funny and real with a dash of angst and misunderstanding here and there. I love the theme of first times and how you carry that from beginning to end, bringing things full circle. Plus a happy ending! ♥____________♥
Soooo... I'll pretty much be quoting a ton of my favorite moments/sentences/etc w/ some commentary, which will probably mostly consist of LOLs, ♥s, '*o*'s and maybe the occasional sane comment outside of my flailing. Y'know, just fyi. -coughs- >.>;; I'm sorry in advance if I get repetitive. And... start!
That's the moment when he knows that this is what he wants to do. He wants to be up on stage, making people smile and be happy. He wants to do something so people can forget about being stressed and sad and tired, even just ( ... )
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For a moment or two Jin flails and hops more angrily, but then he starts laughing too, teetering dangerously. Junno lets go of his leg, and they both collapse onto the nearest bed, helpless with hilarity.
This made me laugh. I love how the tense situation is sort of diffused, and through something Junno did. It could have escalated, but because it's Junno and he's calm and not prone to violence, he chose not to take it a step further. This was a wonderful moment between Jin and Junno.
"Yeah, really. I'm a horse of a completely different color." He isn't a mysterious, unfathomable kind of guy. If he takes someone by surprise, it's just because they haven't been paying attention.This totally hits home for me because I find that to be absolutely, completely true about Junno. Kind of reminds me of the whole GIRLS situation, what with people jumping on the 'Junno-is-AWESOME' bandwagon and me thinking 'Umm, he was awesome all along'. I mean, I myself didn't have the greatest first impression of him when I first got into KAT-TUN ( ... )
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Junno loves first dates, once the initial awkwardness has passed.
Another lovely character moment for Junno. I love what this says about him. And Megumi? Megumi from the KAT-TUNx3 date episode? :)
Still nothing. Well, Junno likes a challenge.
He certainly does! I love your Junno. I love him trying to break Kame from his bad mood and him just not giving up until he gets at least a hint of a positive reaction. This was a great Kame/Junno scene. ♥♥♥
All of the brittle hardness seems to flow out of him on a single exhaled breath, leaving behind only a tired-looking young man in really startling clothes.
Oh Kame... ♥
Besides: Frustration and anger aren't good looks on Kame. He's more photogenic when he's happy, and they have photoshoots coming up.
:D :D :D :D :D Oh Junno... I like that he thinks Kame's more photogenic when happy.
** Incidentally, Kame claims it's the latest fashion to dress up in hyper-expensive monstrosities that make handsome guys look like hobos who scavenge from circus dumpsters. He doesn't phrase it ( ... )
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Junno concentrates on breathing for a moment, just until the tightness in his throat eases. His eyes sting, but it's not too bad, so he blinks and tries for a smile.
-HUGS TIGHTER- ;____________________;
Junno takes a deep, even breath and digs down deep, past the spreading hollow ache of loss. He remembers the wry, crooked grin Kazuya reserves just for him; the way he laughs when he's happy, and the warmth and affection between them.
All of that will still be there when this awkwardness is long past.
GAH. Shot. Right in the heart. So bittersweet and lovely and no, I'm not tearing up- what? >.>;; It's just the... dust. The dust. From my screen. OTL
The words taste ashen and joyless in Junno's mouth, but that's okay. They'll be true in a little while; he just has to wait. It won't take long at all.
He holds on to the thought fiercely, concentrates until he believes it.
Seriously, this whole section... ;__________________________________________; -HUGS EVEN TIGHTER-
Junno's the one who breaks up with Kazuya, that first ( ... )
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"I'm not worried," Junno murmurs, and shifts closer still for another kiss. Kazuya groans into his mouth and melts against him. And there are his wandering hands again, too, soon followed by the urgent kissing, pushing of Junno against random flat surfaces, and heavy breathing.
ASJFHSKJDFHSKJDHFSKJHDDFJSLJFSLKSHG *____________________________________________________________________________________________*
It's going to be better than first dates. Better than 11:11 o'clock. Better even than sweet potatoes in winter, and any number of beaches without sand fleas.
No more bitter candy shell. From here on in, it's sweet chocolate center all the way.
Hell yeah, it will. I'm getting all the warm fuzzies from this fic and I love it. *o* I said this earlier, but I love you bringing everything full circle, so to speak. Kame's going to be better than all those lovely things listed. Kame is the sweet chocolate center. LOLOLOL.
Junno grins, slowly, and watches Kazuya's eyes widen. Startled is a good look on him, too.Kame having a ( ... )
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Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback - I love that you are so happy with my versions of Junno and Kame, and like the footnotes and the first times, and all the little details, and the happy ending and the Kazuya and the canon bits and the stalking and touching, and - basically I could just quote all your comments back at you and flail more at your flailing. :-) But I'll restrain myself and just pick out a few things...
I myself didn't have the greatest first impression of him when I first got into KAT-TUN, but I've seen the light and it's glorious. ;)
Isn't it? :-)) Yay for the Junno-love! I'm sure Kame agrees...
This is a hilarious scenario to imagine. Junno singing Samurai Love Attack and stripping, ROFL. xDDDDDD Kame cheering him on with yen just brings it up another notch, lololol. I can only imagine the thoughts and ( ... )
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