May 03, 2009 12:02
OMG. Finally, *finally* - after I have shut myself away from the world for days, editing into crazy hours of the morning - the first draft of the story that's been driving me crazy* is finished. To think it started out as a quick and dirty PWP - now it is slightly over 30.000 words long and has plot, despite my best efforts. I'll have to try harder next time... though right now, I'm really not sure that I ever want to write a sex scene again.
So... is anyone up for beta-reading a JE AU about Junno and Ryo undercover in a gay BDSM club? Pretty please? With NC-17 on top? (And not nearly as many puns as this would have you believe?)
I really, really need outside opinions on this story. Grammar and spelling should be mostly okay, though I'm also always glad for input there; mainly, though, I'd love someone to look over the story and tell me if it *works*. (I also just really need to post this to prevent myself from giving the thing another "quick read-through" and descending into editing hell again. Argh.)
* Or to be exact, one of the stories that's been driving me crazy. But I'm not thinking about that now. Not. Thinking.