Review of peganthyrus

[draconid]

This is my first review in far too long, so apologies if I'm a bit rusty.

peganthyrus specifically requested a review of only public entries, so here goes.

Main: 39/50

Intelligence: 8/10
Most indication of intelligence came from some very well written entries. However, the thing that impressed me the most was pegantyrus' desire to create a style that uses correct

Comments

[shatterstripes]

It's more that the friends-only/private entries had been pretty rare at the time I asked for a review - at the time, I'd recently come out about my gender change, and that was the main source of locked entries. The friends ones are mostly dubious snarking about the online communities I hang out in, secret notes to two or three people, or about things that may not be precisely legal.

I don't try to be Funny, so I guess I'm not that surprised at the low score on 'humor'. Some of the things I write are funny-at-the-time, or are obscure in-jokes - there's stuff in it that will make about five people laugh, hard, and leave everyone else vaguely conscious there was a joke there.

And I also try to keep it mostly angst-free... angst gets vented into it, but that's in private entries. Or it's obscure

[aliciasacchi]

try review username: stevethemodel
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