Review of peganthyrus

[draconid]

This is my first review in far too long, so apologies if I'm a bit rusty.

peganthyrus specifically requested a review of only public entries, so here goes.

Main: 39/50

Intelligence: 8/10
Most indication of intelligence came from some very well written entries. However, the thing that impressed me the most was pegantyrus' desire to create a style that uses correct

Comments

[shatterstripes]

It's more that the friends-only/private entries had been pretty rare at the time I asked for a review - at the time, I'd recently come out about my gender change, and that was the main source of locked entries. The friends ones are mostly dubious snarking about the online communities I hang out in, secret notes to two or three people, or about things that may not be precisely legal.

I don't try to be Funny, so I guess I'm not that surprised at the low score on 'humor'. Some of the things I write are funny-at-the-time, or are obscure in-jokes - there's stuff in it that will make about five people laugh, hard, and leave everyone else vaguely conscious there was a joke there.

And I also try to keep it mostly angst-free... angst gets vented into it, but that's in private entries. Or it's obscure.

Most of the user images are pulled from my own art, by the way. A couple are cropped from pictures friends drew for me, one is taken from the work of one of my influences, and there are photos. But yeah, no borders, no flickertwitchyness for the sake of flickertwitchyness, no movie captures, no eye-blinks.

And I probably need to stop posting when drunk. I'm new to this 'alcohol' thing.