[Multichapter] Our life is a Dance with Death - Chapter 3, A Matter of Life and Death

[rainbowdots888]

Title : Our life is a Dance with Death - Chapter 3, A Matter of Life and Death
Author: rainbowdots888
Pairings: Ryo x Ohkura, Ohkura x Subaru
Rating: PG 15 (swearing, blood)
Length: Multi Chapter ( 3 / ? )
Words: 3274
Genre: AU, angst, romance
Disclaimer: Too bad for me, I don't own these men... just these stories.

Summary: 8UPPERS AU. Expect fights, blood,

Comments

[lalois]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh <3 <3 <3
I'll be back when I gain my brain back XD

Yes... Kind of.”
“There's no 'kind of' with him. It's yes or no. Friendly advice.”
guh <3

[rainbowdots888]

But... where did you lose your brain ??

I'm glad you liked it anyway ... ♥

[lalois]

Sorry, I still have to complete my comment, I've been busy -_-
I liked this chapter a lot, even if I still find the Ars x Johnny a bit weird, psychologically speaking. I can't help it ^^''
Well then how many people exactly come to 'visit' Johnny's room XD? I have to say I feel jealous XD XD XD

You are going to tame the beast inside you and become a kitten purring in his arms. You want him ? Teach him how to be loved properly
awww <3

“You will, even if I say 'no', right ?” And for the first time in weeks, Ace saw a genuine smile stretch the corner of Johnny's lip
<3

I love everything. Ace's following Johnny, their being chased, the run, stopping by Temptation Room and the last scene, omg, so sensual and heart-breaking, Ace's lips making its way to Johnny's scars (both literally and psychologically speaking)... ugh, so inspiring!!!!

the wicked journey <3
thanks for writing a lot. is next chapter going to be "aired" (like a movie! like Uppers movie!) soon?

[rainbowdots888]

Thank you for commenting ♥♥

Well then how many people exactly come to 'visit' Johnny's room XD?
It's quite a fascinating place !! let's stop at two visitors on the same night ...

Ace's lips making its way to Johnny's scars (both literally and psychologically speaking)... ugh, so inspiring!!!!

It's the scene I wanted to write the most tbh. A kind of "rehabilitation" of his sufferings. I'm weird.

is next chapter going to be "aired" (like a movie! like Uppers movie!) soon?

I'm still working on it but I think it will be up before the end of this week. I've had troubles expressing what I wanted and also with one characterization. And life... XD

Anyway, thanks for supporting me <3<3

[takepluche]

Hi there !

Geez I'm so late... Where the time flies away like that ? O_O

Anyway, back to the chapter !

The conversation between Arsenal and Ace is sooooo interesting !! And I kinda feel sorry for Arsenal.... he seems so remorseful and lonely...

Because now, you just sound like a stalker to me
--> I can't contractict Ace XD I understand why he's doing research during the night and his nostalgia but in the first place, it's kinda creepy.

But my feelings are real. They won't go, they're haunting me. I want him so bad it makes me crazy.
--> In a way, I think Ace's love feelings for Johnny are quite... fast ? But I love this passage so much so it's ok ♥♥♥♥ As if Ace himself doesn't know if it's pure love or mainly sexual attraction.

I didn't expect mercy from you. You want him ? Alright. He wants you. But let me tell you, you're embarking on a wicked journey. If you're hurting him though, you know I'll be there to make you understand what it takes to be a gentleman... You are going to tame the beast inside you and become a kitten

[rainbowdots888]

Hey ! nice to see you here again !

Thank you so much for reading and taking time for such a complete comment !!

I'm glad you liked this chapter :-)

In a way, I think Ace's love feelings for Johnny are quite... fast ?
Yes they are. What I wanted to show is how love can hide and suddenly spawn from an incident, a spark. As if suddenly he realized that he had waited for this. And he's so confused about it. But well, there's more told about that in the following chapters ;-)

Arsenal's mistake was hard to write for me but they broke up for a reason... and for someone so used to extreme behaviors as Johnny, it had to be big. Arsenal is a rough lad, hiding his feelings deep. Poor him. He'd deserve a whole story to himself !

Johnny seems so desperate ;;
Sorry to say that now, but more desperation to come. (but not only desperation)

And kinda funny thanks to Ace's stupid plan XDDD
Ace's far from being the most clever of them all XD