[Multichapter] Our life is a Dance with Death - Chapter 3, A Matter of Life and Death

[rainbowdots888]

Title : Our life is a Dance with Death - Chapter 3, A Matter of Life and Death
Author: rainbowdots888
Pairings: Ryo x Ohkura, Ohkura x Subaru
Rating: PG 15 (swearing, blood)
Length: Multi Chapter ( 3 / ? )
Words: 3274
Genre: AU, angst, romance
Disclaimer: Too bad for me, I don't own these men... just these stories.

Summary: 8UPPERS AU. Expect fights, blood,

Comments

[takepluche]

Hi there !

Geez I'm so late... Where the time flies away like that ? O_O

Anyway, back to the chapter !

The conversation between Arsenal and Ace is sooooo interesting !! And I kinda feel sorry for Arsenal.... he seems so remorseful and lonely...

Because now, you just sound like a stalker to me
--> I can't contractict Ace XD I understand why he's doing research during the night and his nostalgia but in the first place, it's kinda creepy.

But my feelings are real. They won't go, they're haunting me. I want him so bad it makes me crazy.
--> In a way, I think Ace's love feelings for Johnny are quite... fast ? But I love this passage so much so it's ok ♥♥♥♥ As if Ace himself doesn't know if it's pure love or mainly sexual attraction.

I didn't expect mercy from you. You want him ? Alright. He wants you. But let me tell you, you're embarking on a wicked journey. If you're hurting him though, you know I'll be there to make you understand what it takes to be a gentleman... You are going to tame the beast inside you and become a kitten purring in his arms. You want him ? Teach him how to be loved properly. It's a course he has skipped way too much. If you succeed my friend, I'll be the happiest man alive, but don't fool yourself, others burnt their wings at that little game before you.”
--> Gosh I love all that tirade *_______* We see all the love and the worry Arsenal feels for Johnny. And once again, how much he regrets to have failed before... *hugs Arsenal*

WTF ?!!!! Arsenal almost hit Johnny ?!!! Ok I understand that he felt powerless and angry but NO !!! Don't hit him O_O Moreover, he knows that Johnny is beaten by the other fucker so don't act like him, you moron ! raaaaaaaah >_> I'm not sure that I want to hug him now....

I'm useful, you all need me.
--> Awww... Johnny seems so desperate ;;

It's heartbreaking to see that after all these years, all they've been through, Johnny still fears that the others abandon him... ><

Wooow the scene with the henchmen was stressful. And kinda funny thanks to Ace's stupid plan XDDD at least they're safe for the moment !

Awwwww the last scene is cute, sensual and sad in a way.... No more subterfuge and get-oup. Just the cruel reality of Johnny's life ;_;

caressing the scars in a desperate attempt to transform them into a pleasurable sensation
--> <3 <3 <3 <3

Please, help me. I've lost control... You have to save me from myself
--> Johnny T_____T

And I'm done with this... commentary ? XDDD

Thank for this long chapter *_*

[rainbowdots888]

Hey ! nice to see you here again !

Thank you so much for reading and taking time for such a complete comment !!

I'm glad you liked this chapter :-)

In a way, I think Ace's love feelings for Johnny are quite... fast ?
Yes they are. What I wanted to show is how love can hide and suddenly spawn from an incident, a spark. As if suddenly he realized that he had waited for this. And he's so confused about it. But well, there's more told about that in the following chapters ;-)

Arsenal's mistake was hard to write for me but they broke up for a reason... and for someone so used to extreme behaviors as Johnny, it had to be big. Arsenal is a rough lad, hiding his feelings deep. Poor him. He'd deserve a whole story to himself !

Johnny seems so desperate ;;
Sorry to say that now, but more desperation to come. (but not only desperation)

And kinda funny thanks to Ace's stupid plan XDDD

Ace's far from being the most clever of them all XD

You're welcome !! It's always a pleasure to find your nice comments !!
I hope you'll like the rest of the story !