3503: Things Better Left Unsaid - IngeniumNoctuam
Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.
The next story on my Just In list is an attempt at a crackfic, but I didn't find the joke funny. The next one's to vague.
TITLE: Things Better Left Unsaid
PERPETRATOR: IngeniumNoctuam
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None...
SUMMARY:”After an unfortunate potions accident everyone is able to hear Sirius' thoughts, whether he wants them to or not, Wolfstar RL/SB.”
FULL NAME: Sirius, Remus eventually
SPECIES: Everybody can read his mind.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Eventually he will possess Remus heart.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The results of a potion end up with effects which would never occur in fandom, and are honestly only there so Sirius is forced to admit his hidden feelings for Remus so the two can hook up and start kissing at the end.
ORIGIN: We have another story where a potion accident forces the plot.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The characters are out of character, and the relationship is forced.
NOTES: I think I've seen this plot before, but it was with a het pairing. Even then I didn't buy the whole scenaro. Said scenario just feels to forced.
SAMPLE:
This is all your fault, Sirius thought.
"This is all your fault," he said aloud, to his ex best friend James.
"You know you didn't have to say that out loud," James pointed out.
"Agh, whatever!" Sirius exclaimed as they reached their destination, the common room.
"You need to take a shower, that potion smells terrible and if you don't try to get it off now it may very well stay that way."
"Potter, I don't need your advice now leave me be!" Bloody wanker thinks he can tell me what do do! Sirius thought stomping up the stairs to the boys dorm, Wouldn't be in this mess if he didn't get distracted by Evans all the time! How hard is it to stir clockwise five times!
"I heard that!" James yelled at the receding back of Sirius, who turned and stuck his tongue out.
The next story on my Just In list is an attempt at a crackfic, but I didn't find the joke funny. The next one's to vague.
TITLE: Things Better Left Unsaid
PERPETRATOR: IngeniumNoctuam
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None...
SUMMARY:”After an unfortunate potions accident everyone is able to hear Sirius' thoughts, whether he wants them to or not, Wolfstar RL/SB.”
FULL NAME: Sirius, Remus eventually
SPECIES: Everybody can read his mind.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: Eventually he will possess Remus heart.
CONNECTION TO CANON: The results of a potion end up with effects which would never occur in fandom, and are honestly only there so Sirius is forced to admit his hidden feelings for Remus so the two can hook up and start kissing at the end.
ORIGIN: We have another story where a potion accident forces the plot.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: The characters are out of character, and the relationship is forced.
NOTES: I think I've seen this plot before, but it was with a het pairing. Even then I didn't buy the whole scenaro. Said scenario just feels to forced.
SAMPLE:
This is all your fault, Sirius thought.
"This is all your fault," he said aloud, to his ex best friend James.
"You know you didn't have to say that out loud," James pointed out.
"Agh, whatever!" Sirius exclaimed as they reached their destination, the common room.
"You need to take a shower, that potion smells terrible and if you don't try to get it off now it may very well stay that way."
"Potter, I don't need your advice now leave me be!" Bloody wanker thinks he can tell me what do do! Sirius thought stomping up the stairs to the boys dorm, Wouldn't be in this mess if he didn't get distracted by Evans all the time! How hard is it to stir clockwise five times!
"I heard that!" James yelled at the receding back of Sirius, who turned and stuck his tongue out.