3471: A Forbiden Love Story - Hermione Granger/Emily Bellatrix Riddle & Draco Malfoy
Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.
TITLE: A Forbiden Love Story
PERPETRATOR: JANEVOLTURIJANE VOLTURI
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: The story has a picture of Draco from the movies for the cover.
SUMMARY:”What if during seventh year, Draco decides to tell Hermione the truth about her past. How will she react when she finds out that she is the daughter of the Dark Lord and a Death Eater? How will everyone else all react once she tells them the truth? Will the three best friends still be best friends? Or will Ron try to kill her after all these years? Read and Review!”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger/Emily Bellatrix Riddle and Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: Hermione is Voldemort's daughter.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter is Draco and Hermione flirting with each other in Gryffindor tower. Ron overhears and gets pissed off in the next chapter and she gets into a fight with Pansey. The third chapter is an author's note about not being able to update.
ORIGIN: The summary sums everything up. I'm under the impression Hermione is also Draco's cousin, but I don't know if the writer thought about that.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Hermione has a split personality in her sleep which Draco talks to.
NOTES: I've featured this writer before. They wrote “Prince of Arendelle Returning Home”. I'm afraid the writer is using a sock puppet on said story to boost their self esteem rather then taking the criticism they receive on their stories seriously.
SAMPLE:
When he had finally made it to the Gryffindor Tower, he said the password, and he was let into the loins' den.
He slowly made his way up the stairs that lead up to the seventh floor of the girls' dormitory, he knew that if anyone were to find him there, then he would be dead for sure. He slowly crept as quietly as he could into her room, when he was in her room, he slowly shut the door, then he went over to the bed where she slept quietly and soundlessly, and he laid beside her beautiful sleeping figure.
He didn't realized that she had spoken, he froze, he looked to see if she had woken up, but then he remembered that she talked in her sleep, she whispered, "Draco."
He whispered, "Yes, it's me."
She turned to him without waking up, she rolled into a ball next to him, he placed one of his arms around her, pulling her close to him, she whispered, "Draco, I love you."
He whispered back, "I love you too."
She whispered, "I only want you, I can't live without you. You and everyone else are all I want. I want to go back home. Back to the dark princess that I was born to be."
He whispered, "As you wish, my beautiful princess, you shell return back to the royal family."
A smile had appeared on her face, she began to fall back asleep, when he was sure that she was asleep, he slipped out from under her, then he bent down to place a soft kiss on her forehead, and whispered, "I love you Emily Bellatrix Riddle. And I am sorry for all that I had done to you all these years."
He went out of the loins' den as dawn was approaching.
But he didn't know that another Gryfinndor was watching and listening in on their quite conversation.
TITLE: A Forbiden Love Story
PERPETRATOR: JANEVOLTURIJANE VOLTURI
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: The story has a picture of Draco from the movies for the cover.
SUMMARY:”What if during seventh year, Draco decides to tell Hermione the truth about her past. How will she react when she finds out that she is the daughter of the Dark Lord and a Death Eater? How will everyone else all react once she tells them the truth? Will the three best friends still be best friends? Or will Ron try to kill her after all these years? Read and Review!”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger/Emily Bellatrix Riddle and Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: Hermione is Voldemort's daughter.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter is Draco and Hermione flirting with each other in Gryffindor tower. Ron overhears and gets pissed off in the next chapter and she gets into a fight with Pansey. The third chapter is an author's note about not being able to update.
ORIGIN: The summary sums everything up. I'm under the impression Hermione is also Draco's cousin, but I don't know if the writer thought about that.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: Hermione has a split personality in her sleep which Draco talks to.
NOTES: I've featured this writer before. They wrote “Prince of Arendelle Returning Home”. I'm afraid the writer is using a sock puppet on said story to boost their self esteem rather then taking the criticism they receive on their stories seriously.
SAMPLE:
When he had finally made it to the Gryffindor Tower, he said the password, and he was let into the loins' den.
He slowly made his way up the stairs that lead up to the seventh floor of the girls' dormitory, he knew that if anyone were to find him there, then he would be dead for sure. He slowly crept as quietly as he could into her room, when he was in her room, he slowly shut the door, then he went over to the bed where she slept quietly and soundlessly, and he laid beside her beautiful sleeping figure.
He didn't realized that she had spoken, he froze, he looked to see if she had woken up, but then he remembered that she talked in her sleep, she whispered, "Draco."
He whispered, "Yes, it's me."
She turned to him without waking up, she rolled into a ball next to him, he placed one of his arms around her, pulling her close to him, she whispered, "Draco, I love you."
He whispered back, "I love you too."
She whispered, "I only want you, I can't live without you. You and everyone else are all I want. I want to go back home. Back to the dark princess that I was born to be."
He whispered, "As you wish, my beautiful princess, you shell return back to the royal family."
A smile had appeared on her face, she began to fall back asleep, when he was sure that she was asleep, he slipped out from under her, then he bent down to place a soft kiss on her forehead, and whispered, "I love you Emily Bellatrix Riddle. And I am sorry for all that I had done to you all these years."
He went out of the loins' den as dawn was approaching.
But he didn't know that another Gryfinndor was watching and listening in on their quite conversation.