5121: The Uncover of a New Family - Harry Potter and company
No, I’m not purposefully looking for MCU crossovers. I say this because someone noted I’ve had quite a few. However, this gives me an idea starting tomorrow.
Also, didn't mean to post this as late as I have. Woops.
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Title: The Uncover of a New Family
Perpetrator: The Uncover of a New Family
Sue-O-Meter: Awful (though the rating could go higher)
Cover/Banner Art: The writer’s profile pic is of a flower with the silhouette of a bee overlayed.
Summary: “Crossover. Harry killed Voldemort, married Ginny and had three kids… and then everything turned upside down. Harry fled with his four kids to New York, trying to find the peace that they couldn't have in England when SHIELD found them. And what is this about Voldemort being alive?”
Full Name: Harry
Sueworts House(s): Quanonreip for a lot of things, Bitchiwitch for making Harry's woes everyones fault but his own, possibly future Totsietramp as the goal is to pair Harry with Stark
Species: Mean!Harry
Physical Description: Like canon.
Possessions: Custody of his kids because he's been victimized by Ginny's cheating rather than because he's the fit parent while proving he's actually the unfit parent by taking them to another country despriving them of the chance to know their maternal family.
Origin: “But then the problems started. The Death Eaters on the run attacked Andromeda Tonks, killing her, and Teddy Lupin had to go live with the Potters. And then after Ginny birthed their baby girl it came to the surface that she had been sleeping around. Harry divorced her and his two best friends turned against him. Harry took the kids to Gringotts to check them to find out who their father was and it was proven that he was the father. And then Ginny tried to take the kids, the whore. Luckily the purebloods took Harry's side and she lost everything. The same day that he won, he left the country, taking his kids with him.”
Connection to Canon: The above is what leads into the story as per the summary where Harry is taken to see Voldemort behind glass wanting to talk to him. Everything after the prologue is not on ffnet as the writer ran afoul of the site rules on the pit, but I did find the story on AO3. Fury actually lets Voldemort out in his office in the second chapter while Harry is talking baby talk to Lilu. (His daughter.) Voldemort then proceeds to steal the kids because of his connection to Harry because Harry killed Voldemort without destroying all the Horocrux. Story rambled in chapter three and I decided I’d had enough.
Special Abilities: He’s not the master of death, so that must mean this plot will work, right? Oh. He’s also to be paired with Tony Stark.
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Notes: There are a lot of conviences in the prologue, which is the only thing posted which is why on this one the only sample is quoted in the origin section. And then I came across an author’s note about how the writer’s story ended up taken down, so only the first chapter is up. I tried reading the story over on Ao3 only to find myself not enjoying how the plot dragged along. So, I decided to quote some reviews on this one as the help me a bit with the train of thought I’m having on this one.
Chapter 2
“plus harry never really wanted to kill voldemort or face him not really its always someone pushing him harry to do it”
Which makes me wonder why the events didn’t go down as they did in the original canon material.
“I would also like to mention that four-year-olds don't speak with the excessive 'w' sound that you portray her to have. They have adequate speech at this age in order to correctly pronounce all of the letters of the alphabet. The speech patterns that you assigned her are more closely related to two-year-old speech. Because of this, you make her seem to have a learning and developmental disability.”
Lily (Lilu) isn’t the only child who didn’t act their age, but this is one of the reasons I didn’t want to go much further.
“I can forgive you having Ginny cheat on Harry. We know she is brave and devoted in the 7th book by enduring the cruciatus to help Harry defeat Voldemort, but she could easily be traumatized by the effect of the battle and act differently afterwords. I don't really approve of just dismissing her as a whore though like the cheating was natural given her personality.”
I’m going to admit I’d not thought about Ginny cheating because of PTSD, yet now that someone else brought it up I find myself feeling even more bothered with how Harry easily got custody of the kids simply because he was the biological father, but there’s a definite implication that he would abandon one of the kids (not including his Godson of course) if they weren’t biologically his.
“you do understand that Voldemort is quite possible the best example of Evil in modern fiction and you just made him out to be Snidely Whiplash a moustached villain who is ineffective”
That describes him quite well, but I was trying to put into words what about Voldemort’s character made me go nope. He’s now bark and no bite, so to speak.
Chapter Three - There’s more Ginny bashing, but when one of the readers says, “i don’t understand harry friends take he’s slut of ex’s word”, why would they take Harry’s word for it when he forcibly gained complete custody of the kids then took them out of the country thus cutting them off from Ginny’s side of the family as if they’re also to blame for Ginny’s cheating. Add to this, gaining sole custody is a rather strong punishment for cheating.
In fact, Pottersues wishes to note that cheating is not enough in a court of law to gain custody despite the writer making it supposedly enough in the Ministry of Magic’s court of law. I’d even go so far to think that Harry depriving the rest of the Weasley family access to the children would be grounds for him to be denied custody.
I also find it interesting that the cheating is in effect word of mouth when we’re presented with it, but Ginny is treated as wrong for wanting her kids in her life as if Harry has more parental rights simply because she cheated. According to the following article, “When one spouse has been found to be cheating, the other spouse might file for divorce, but that doesn’t mean that the victimized spouse will have more rights than the cheating spouse.”
And according to that, Harry, because he doesn’t have the best interest of the kids factored in in that he is seeking to deprive them of their mother as well as their maternal family, would have the harder case to fight. Actually, it says that right in the article I posted a link to.
“The court will likely choose the parent who will allow the child uninterrupted time with the non-custodial parent, that parent’s family as well as relationships with extended families. The community where the child grew up will be a factor as well as their school and whether the parent will allow the child to stay in the same area.”
Contrary to what certain reviews say, while Harry is the victim of cheating, Ginny is also a victim of Harry’s shenanigans as are his kids.
And no, I don’t know how Voldemort kidnapping Harry’s kids turned out in the end. Didn’t want to stick around and find out.