5094: Ginger head's arc reactor - Ron ,Tony, Arthur, Bill, Harry, Draco
A Suethor is complaining yet again about their story being featured.
Title: Ginger head's arc reactor
Perpetrator: orionexpress
Sue-O-Meter: Troll (If I didn’t suspect a troll on this one, I’d have only given it an awful rating.)
Cover/Banner Art: Their avatar is I think the main characters from Tangled, but I couldn’t be sure.
Summary: “Ron has been living in a shadow for a long time. he went to america, found Tony Stark and became his light. yay mpreg , rare pairing...no pepper pots... ron as pepper pots.”
Full Name: Ron, Tony Stark, Arthur Weasley, Bill, Harry, Draco
Sueworts House(s): Four of the six are in tootsie tramp for being Relationship Stues while the other two are in Bitchiwitch for being Woobie Stues.
Species: Not the canon characters.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Poessessions: n/a
Connection to Canon: Let’s just say I knew I’d be applying the Hino tag to this one the instant I started reading the first paragraph as a lot of characters aren’t themselves. Did I mention that this is written in first person? Ron leaves for American and then we skip ahead three years and find out that Stark and Ron are already in love. We’re expected to believe bill (that’s the writer’s capitalization) that “my family is broken the moment Ron has left us” and not because of Fred’s death. More Ron and Stark being in a relationship, but becoming the romantic interest of someone and not doing anything else is honestly the exact opposite moving out of someone’s shadow. Of course, by chapter three we’ve got Ron pregnant, next chapter he’s coming home. Draco and Harry show up as a couple in the sixth chapter just because and seventh chapter is more Drarry. Eight chapter is them arriving home finally and everyone being quite happy. That’s all nine chapters and around 7k of what’s been posted.
Origin: We’ve a writer actually focusing on Ron for once. I’m not sure if that is a good thing though, given the fact this is a mpreg and Ron’s a stand in now for a female character.
Special Abilities: Not being the canon characters.
Notes: Why suspect this is a troll? Because it reads to much like an attempt at a mordern day My Immortal, what with the capitalization issues and putting the dialogue in bold. The story also feels like it's attemtping to fall into the Crackfic genre but failing misserably.
Sample:
Mr Weasley p o v
My whole family was sitting on the table except one I I look at our family clock he still at work after the war he tries to skip this meal fat right to speak about it to Molly she just says he is getting used to work but also know my little boy something is going on and I don't like this feeling my thought was interrupted went Ron came inside the house he looks tired he just took a bowl and was about to leave I stop them and ask him to take seat he obeyed me when is the last time Ron argued with anyone as far as I know he is my angel though he is a big boy now a man he never been disobedient at any point of his life always loyal thinking of others before him like all my children I wish it on has a very sweet future but he is still in training which is a shock to me he is good at fighting then why he is not an Auror why did they hold him back "dad ", I heard Ron "I was thinking of change my location" what he is talking about why did he want to change his location I want to say no but that makes you happy I have to accept it he is my boy but he is baby of the Family though people say Ginny is a baby but no for me my Ron so sweet and innocent people that's not deserve him Harry Potter has left him but his Shadow has never forgotten to torture him I cannot forgive Harry Potter but he is the father of my grandchildren yes Hermione moved on except my baby Ron stuck for 5 years in the same place has has started along with them.
Title: Ginger head's arc reactor
Perpetrator: orionexpress
Sue-O-Meter: Troll (If I didn’t suspect a troll on this one, I’d have only given it an awful rating.)
Cover/Banner Art: Their avatar is I think the main characters from Tangled, but I couldn’t be sure.
Summary: “Ron has been living in a shadow for a long time. he went to america, found Tony Stark and became his light. yay mpreg , rare pairing...no pepper pots... ron as pepper pots.”
Full Name: Ron, Tony Stark, Arthur Weasley, Bill, Harry, Draco
Sueworts House(s): Four of the six are in tootsie tramp for being Relationship Stues while the other two are in Bitchiwitch for being Woobie Stues.
Species: Not the canon characters.
Hair: n/a
Eyes: n/a
Markings: n/a
Poessessions: n/a
Connection to Canon: Let’s just say I knew I’d be applying the Hino tag to this one the instant I started reading the first paragraph as a lot of characters aren’t themselves. Did I mention that this is written in first person? Ron leaves for American and then we skip ahead three years and find out that Stark and Ron are already in love. We’re expected to believe bill (that’s the writer’s capitalization) that “my family is broken the moment Ron has left us” and not because of Fred’s death. More Ron and Stark being in a relationship, but becoming the romantic interest of someone and not doing anything else is honestly the exact opposite moving out of someone’s shadow. Of course, by chapter three we’ve got Ron pregnant, next chapter he’s coming home. Draco and Harry show up as a couple in the sixth chapter just because and seventh chapter is more Drarry. Eight chapter is them arriving home finally and everyone being quite happy. That’s all nine chapters and around 7k of what’s been posted.
Origin: We’ve a writer actually focusing on Ron for once. I’m not sure if that is a good thing though, given the fact this is a mpreg and Ron’s a stand in now for a female character.
Special Abilities: Not being the canon characters.
Notes: Why suspect this is a troll? Because it reads to much like an attempt at a mordern day My Immortal, what with the capitalization issues and putting the dialogue in bold. The story also feels like it's attemtping to fall into the Crackfic genre but failing misserably.
Sample:
Mr Weasley p o v
My whole family was sitting on the table except one I I look at our family clock he still at work after the war he tries to skip this meal fat right to speak about it to Molly she just says he is getting used to work but also know my little boy something is going on and I don't like this feeling my thought was interrupted went Ron came inside the house he looks tired he just took a bowl and was about to leave I stop them and ask him to take seat he obeyed me when is the last time Ron argued with anyone as far as I know he is my angel though he is a big boy now a man he never been disobedient at any point of his life always loyal thinking of others before him like all my children I wish it on has a very sweet future but he is still in training which is a shock to me he is good at fighting then why he is not an Auror why did they hold him back "dad ", I heard Ron "I was thinking of change my location" what he is talking about why did he want to change his location I want to say no but that makes you happy I have to accept it he is my boy but he is baby of the Family though people say Ginny is a baby but no for me my Ron so sweet and innocent people that's not deserve him Harry Potter has left him but his Shadow has never forgotten to torture him I cannot forgive Harry Potter but he is the father of my grandchildren yes Hermione moved on except my baby Ron stuck for 5 years in the same place has has started along with them.