4492: Harrison Thornblake and The Boy Who Lived - Aaron Sirius Potter and Harrison Potter/Thornblake
Title: Harrison Thornblake and The Boy Who Lived
Perpetrator: ValentineKnight
Sue-O-Meter: Bad (Can easily go into the awful or toxic range, but likely won’t go into the okay or good range)
Cover/Banner Art: None. The writer isn’t very new.
Summary: “(I suck at summaries, so here I go)Imagine a world where Harry is three years older than his younger brother Aaron who is the Boy Who Lived, and is abandoned until he finds a family named Thornblake and goes to a different school for six years at Thornblake Academy of Enchantment and Magic. At his seventh year, he finds his family and competes with his brother for the Triwizard Cup”
Full Name: Harrison Potter/Thornblake and Aaron Sirius Potter
Species: Harry’s younger brother - at least he’s not a twin
Hair: n/a
Eyes: brown
Markings: None
Possessions: None
Connection to Canon: Pretty much the summary and the first chapter is simply Voldemort attacking the family.
Origin: We’ve got another Boy Who Lived stealing Harry’s thunder.
Special Abilities: Aaron is the Boy Who Lived instead of Harry.
Notes: Don’t you love when the writer does the write up on their own in their summary? Actually, I don’t because I’d like a bit of discovery, but this one is only one chapter so far and it jumped out. I suspect a young writer starting out, so you know the rules.
Sample:
When Lily hears footsteps coming up the stairs, she reminds harry to stay behind her, Harry nods in fear, tears now running down from his vivid green eyes. Suddenly, the door is blown open with a loud bang, the dark man walks through and orders lily in a cold voice "Step aside silly girl." Lily now gathering up all her courage and stands tall "No!" she exclaims. The man just scoffs and stuns lily with his wand. He looks at her prone form and states "Your lucking Snape wanted you alive, mudblood." With that the man now turns to the baby, only to find yet another obstacle in his way. Young Harry stands in front of his little brother's crib, his emerald eyes glaring into the man's scarlet eyes. The big dark man now turns to the three year-old, amusement shown in his eyes. "Don't make me kill you boy." He says to scare the boy into submission, but Harry stands his ground. The man glares at Harry and with a mere flick of his wand, little Harry was thrown across the room, drifting in and out of consciousness. The dark man turns to the baby in the crib to finally do what he came there to do. The man stares down at the brown-eyed baby and exclaims"Avada Kadavra." Once the curse is spoken, and green light shoots out of the man's wand and hits the baby in the forehead, the strangest thing happens. The boy didn't fall dead as expected, instead the green light bounces back toward the man with unimaginable speed that the man can't dodge. He let out an unnatural scream as green light enveloped him and all that was left was his cloak. With that The Dark Lord Voldemort was defeated.
Perpetrator: ValentineKnight
Sue-O-Meter: Bad (Can easily go into the awful or toxic range, but likely won’t go into the okay or good range)
Cover/Banner Art: None. The writer isn’t very new.
Summary: “(I suck at summaries, so here I go)Imagine a world where Harry is three years older than his younger brother Aaron who is the Boy Who Lived, and is abandoned until he finds a family named Thornblake and goes to a different school for six years at Thornblake Academy of Enchantment and Magic. At his seventh year, he finds his family and competes with his brother for the Triwizard Cup”
Full Name: Harrison Potter/Thornblake and Aaron Sirius Potter
Species: Harry’s younger brother - at least he’s not a twin
Hair: n/a
Eyes: brown
Markings: None
Possessions: None
Connection to Canon: Pretty much the summary and the first chapter is simply Voldemort attacking the family.
Origin: We’ve got another Boy Who Lived stealing Harry’s thunder.
Special Abilities: Aaron is the Boy Who Lived instead of Harry.
Notes: Don’t you love when the writer does the write up on their own in their summary? Actually, I don’t because I’d like a bit of discovery, but this one is only one chapter so far and it jumped out. I suspect a young writer starting out, so you know the rules.
Sample:
When Lily hears footsteps coming up the stairs, she reminds harry to stay behind her, Harry nods in fear, tears now running down from his vivid green eyes. Suddenly, the door is blown open with a loud bang, the dark man walks through and orders lily in a cold voice "Step aside silly girl." Lily now gathering up all her courage and stands tall "No!" she exclaims. The man just scoffs and stuns lily with his wand. He looks at her prone form and states "Your lucking Snape wanted you alive, mudblood." With that the man now turns to the baby, only to find yet another obstacle in his way. Young Harry stands in front of his little brother's crib, his emerald eyes glaring into the man's scarlet eyes. The big dark man now turns to the three year-old, amusement shown in his eyes. "Don't make me kill you boy." He says to scare the boy into submission, but Harry stands his ground. The man glares at Harry and with a mere flick of his wand, little Harry was thrown across the room, drifting in and out of consciousness. The dark man turns to the baby in the crib to finally do what he came there to do. The man stares down at the brown-eyed baby and exclaims"Avada Kadavra." Once the curse is spoken, and green light shoots out of the man's wand and hits the baby in the forehead, the strangest thing happens. The boy didn't fall dead as expected, instead the green light bounces back toward the man with unimaginable speed that the man can't dodge. He let out an unnatural scream as green light enveloped him and all that was left was his cloak. With that The Dark Lord Voldemort was defeated.