4212: game SET match - unknown

Apr 05, 2018 22:27

Title: game SET match I was trying to think of why this seemed familiar. I then remembered the 1988 show. Do you know how strange that is?
Perpetrator: Storm Vampire
Sue-O-Meter: Bad (Could go either way, but most likely towards Toxic.)
Cover/Banner Art:
Summary: “What would happen if Dumbledore hid a secret from Harry and everyone else… he has a half-sister. James had a fling right before he started dating Lilly and Dumbledore hid her from everyone during the Triwizard tournament when durmstrang comes to Hogwarts what happens when females are brought into the mix. It's time for Harry to know his half-sister Set.”
Full Name: n/a
Species: She’s Harry’s half-sister.
Hair: See the sample
Eyes:  See the sample.
Markings: See the sample
Possessions: See the sample.
Connection to Canon: The summary says pretty much everything at this point.
Origin: James had a fling with another girl. I’m not sure what to think of that, let alone why she would be hidden from everybody.
Special Abilities: Writers forget Durmstrang and Beauxbatons had students of both gender in the books. I bring this up because the writer pretty much brags in the summary that females are being brought into the mix, meaning they think their character being a female Durmstrang student is somehow a big deal.

Notes: The writer’s character already has multi-colored hair, yet that’s no guarantee the story will be anything more than just bad. Sometimes we’ve seen writers spruce things up a lot in the first chapter before going plot-what-plot on us.

Sample:

So we have two new schools joining us for some fancy tournament that has 3 schools competing and could basically die wow never a boring year here is it.

"Now let us welcome the lovely ladies of Beauxbatons academy of magic and their headmistress Madam Maxime!" Dumbledore shouted. The ladies danced their way up the Great Hall and bowed in front of the headmaster. As their Headmistress comes forward I could tell that everyone was staring as she was even taller than Hagrid. Which is shocking in and of itself I mean how is that even possible.

"Now meet the proud warriors of Durmstrang" Suddenly we hear pounding in a rhythm, the doors open to see handsome young men with staffs walk in. Wow these guys know how to impress as they continued down the hall "and their Headmaster Igor Karkaroff". We all turn around but what shocked everyone was the girl beside him. Igor looked like he was not at all happy to be here but had to be polite.

The girl on the other hand was very beautiful, her hair went all the way down to the small of her back, which black as night but at the end they looked to be flaming red. Her eyes looked like you were staring at the bluest ocean. What shocked everyone was what she was wearing, I have never seen any girl have the confidence to pull off something like that. It was a two piece the top criss crossed over her chest and neck down her stomach while she wore tight black leather pants along high heeled boots. There was an aura of 'don't fuck with me or I will destroy you' around her and it was very intimidating.Title: game SET match I was trying to think of why this seemed familiar. I then remembered the 1988 show. Do you know how strange that is?
Perpetrator: Storm Vampire
Sue-O-Meter: Bad (Could go either way, but most likely towards Toxic.)
Cover/Banner Art:
Summary: “What would happen if Dumbledore hid a secret from Harry and everyone else… he has a half-sister. James had a fling right before he started dating Lilly and Dumbledore hid her from everyone during the Triwizard tournament when durmstrang comes to Hogwarts what happens when females are brought into the mix. It's time for Harry to know his half-sister Set.”
Full Name: n/a
Species: She’s Harry’s half-sister.
Hair: See the sample
Eyes:  See the sample.
Markings: See the sample
Possessions: See the sample.
Connection to Canon: The summary says pretty much everything at this point.
Origin: James had a fling with another girl. I’m not sure what to think of that, let alone why she would be hidden from everybody.
Special Abilities: Writers forget Durmstrang and Beauxbatons had students of both gender in the books. I bring this up because the writer pretty much brags in the summary that females are being brought into the mix, meaning they think their character being a female Durmstrang student is somehow a big deal.

Notes: The writer’s character already has multi-colored hair, yet that’s no guarantee the story will be anything more than just bad. Sometimes we’ve seen writers spruce things up a lot in the first chapter before going plot-what-plot on us.

Sample:

So we have two new schools joining us for some fancy tournament that has 3 schools competing and could basically die wow never a boring year here is it.

"Now let us welcome the lovely ladies of Beauxbatons academy of magic and their headmistress Madam Maxime!" Dumbledore shouted. The ladies danced their way up the Great Hall and bowed in front of the headmaster. As their Headmistress comes forward I could tell that everyone was staring as she was even taller than Hagrid. Which is shocking in and of itself I mean how is that even possible.

"Now meet the proud warriors of Durmstrang" Suddenly we hear pounding in a rhythm, the doors open to see handsome young men with staffs walk in. Wow these guys know how to impress as they continued down the hall "and their Headmaster Igor Karkaroff". We all turn around but what shocked everyone was the girl beside him. Igor looked like he was not at all happy to be here but had to be polite.

The girl on the other hand was very beautiful, her hair went all the way down to the small of her back, which black as night but at the end they looked to be flaming red. Her eyes looked like you were staring at the bluest ocean. What shocked everyone was what she was wearing, I have never seen any girl have the confidence to pull off something like that. It was a two piece the top criss crossed over her chest and neck down her stomach while she wore tight black leather pants along high heeled boots. There was an aura of 'don't fuck with me or I will destroy you' around her and it was very intimidating.

bh - black hair, be - blue eyes, related to the potters, ph - durmstrang, rating - bad, bh - red hair

Previous post Next post
Up