4171: Beautiful disaster - Clytemnestra Black
So far the most popular character to pair an OC up with is Percival. I find that kind of interesting, considering…
Title: Beautiful disaster
Perpetrator: Mrs.Specter-Mikaelson-Reid
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: It’s eight pictures from the movie.
Summary: “The Macusa had a problem with dead people and no one can not help but Newt has a friend with a dark past which can be helped but her hatred for the laws and rules It will have the effect of creating a war between Percival Graves and her but everything is allowed in love and war.”
Full Name: Clytemnestra Black
Species: I’m not sure what she’s supposed to be? An Auror? A freelancer.
Hair: Her hair is described as “fiery”.
Eyes: Also, “she was hard features and an aura of chaos and destruction with her eyes not having any emotion in them but what made her great inmpression was that Newt knew such a person as this woman with weapons and was ready to shoot some in front of all the people.” Suethor, this is not a good thing.
Markings: She is tall, and has “high cheekbones.” Also, we find out that “starting just below the top of her shoulders and descending to almost the middle of her back where twin scars about the width of two fingers and had obviously been sewn shut as if she’d undergone some medical procedure. Only they were big and despite the sewing seemed almost touched with violence as smaller scars lightning out of the two larger ones.”
Possessions: She has a gun, bumping what was already an awful rating up to the Toxic. Also, “she waring leather pants stuck to his legs and behind like a second skin. He was wearing dragon hide thigh high boots a black leather jacket.”
Connection to Canon: Clytemnestra is a parasite sue, yet she’s a parasite sue for a plot which doesn’t actually already exist. She’s there to be Sherlock Holmes, so I guess that makes Newt her Watson? In the second chapter, we start off with all the “Auros froze completely”, as Clymtemnestra draws the attention of everybody. She’s got a horrid attitude, coming in and saying, “My dear Fido , can you explain why yesterday evening came a owl through my window and sat on the bed and looked at me as I had sex?” This is to show how she takes charge of the situation, only to fail miserably. In fact, she continues to refer to Newt as Fido. The Suethor isn’t afraid to tell us her Sue was in a bar fight kicking ass, yet she’s also not shy of using the f-word. Graves gets to see her in the locker room shirtless, and she calls him an asshole. There is no focus on the mystery, but instead some random info dump which has nothing to do with the plot, but we also find out that a Aro Volturi shows up. Oh, and there is ball room dancing, and eating of sweets, but the fact Clytemnestra will kick your butt. I’m not talking the kind where she does so simply because you looked at her wrong, but the kind where she does it just because she can.
Origin: So, I went into the story thinking that the problem mentioned in the summary was actually a problem which couldn’t be solved by the canon characters. Only, I found out it actually is. The writer honestly wants the reader to believe the canon characters are incapable of solving a murder mystery.
Special Abilities: She’s the Sherlock Holmes of the wizarding world, or so the writer wants us to believe. That’s at least an awful rating right there. Oh, no wait! I just realized Clytemnestra is a knock off of Phryne Fisher, and Graves has been morphed into Detective Inspector John “Jack” Robinson. Which makes me wonder how Newt of all people became friends with this Clytemnestra, let alone is supposedly okay with being on touching terms with her. Phryne’s character works, but Clytemnestra doesn’t. Phryne’s not in your face like the OC is. Clytemnestra’s just over the top to the point she’s no longer believable.
Notes: The summary makes me cringe. Did you know that there are over three-thousand stories on the pit which use the words love and war in the title or summary? Almost five hundred of those are for the Harry Potter fandom.
Sample:
And now Newt with Tina ,Graves and Picquery are located around a table with pictures of bodies and magical filters trying to find what it is that kills them. Newt looks at the symptoms from the filters but can not find out what is causing it as Picquery with Tina and Graves was looking at the pictures of the bodies.
The corpses were missing the eyes or the tongue from another corpses were missing fingers and ears but the most horrible thing was that some bodies lacked the heart ,ιn the places where the bodies were found, there is a wall on the walls written with blood the word : zaidi
Newt explained that it was a word of Swahili dialect which means monster.
''No great mind has every existed without a touch of mandess''said Picquery as look at the photos and Newt tried to hide the smile from his face but Tina saw and wondered what he may think.
"Ηe's paranoid, obsessed with power. The hunger constantly for what has been denied him. Be it love or revenge ''said Graves and the first day he took the case has thanks Lewis because Gellert Grindelwald is in prison and he can not hurt him anymore
Newt just slammed his hand againt to head as he laughed.'' I think I'm familiar with the type ''
Everyone look at them like he has crazy because they could not believe it that Newt will know a hard and perverted person like the one they try to catch.
''Well ,why do not you ask him to help us?''asked Fontaine but was cautious with it as they could not believe that sweet and shy magicologo would have contact with people.
''Even if I communicate with my friend will not accept as has a hatred for MACUSA and the Magic Ministry''said Newt and continues to look at his papers as he did not want to make an eye contact with them.
''Mister Scamander ,you will get all your friend in on this and if your friend don't answer to money, he will answer to Seraphina Picquery 's wand''said Picquery with a little bit of anger in her voice as she could not understand it would not hear the orders of President Seraphina.
Newt sigh as the President left the room together with Graves and he knew he would not have a good end.
Title: Beautiful disaster
Perpetrator: Mrs.Specter-Mikaelson-Reid
Sue-O-Meter: Toxic
Cover/Banner Art: It’s eight pictures from the movie.
Summary: “The Macusa had a problem with dead people and no one can not help but Newt has a friend with a dark past which can be helped but her hatred for the laws and rules It will have the effect of creating a war between Percival Graves and her but everything is allowed in love and war.”
Full Name: Clytemnestra Black
Species: I’m not sure what she’s supposed to be? An Auror? A freelancer.
Hair: Her hair is described as “fiery”.
Eyes: Also, “she was hard features and an aura of chaos and destruction with her eyes not having any emotion in them but what made her great inmpression was that Newt knew such a person as this woman with weapons and was ready to shoot some in front of all the people.” Suethor, this is not a good thing.
Markings: She is tall, and has “high cheekbones.” Also, we find out that “starting just below the top of her shoulders and descending to almost the middle of her back where twin scars about the width of two fingers and had obviously been sewn shut as if she’d undergone some medical procedure. Only they were big and despite the sewing seemed almost touched with violence as smaller scars lightning out of the two larger ones.”
Possessions: She has a gun, bumping what was already an awful rating up to the Toxic. Also, “she waring leather pants stuck to his legs and behind like a second skin. He was wearing dragon hide thigh high boots a black leather jacket.”
Connection to Canon: Clytemnestra is a parasite sue, yet she’s a parasite sue for a plot which doesn’t actually already exist. She’s there to be Sherlock Holmes, so I guess that makes Newt her Watson? In the second chapter, we start off with all the “Auros froze completely”, as Clymtemnestra draws the attention of everybody. She’s got a horrid attitude, coming in and saying, “My dear Fido , can you explain why yesterday evening came a owl through my window and sat on the bed and looked at me as I had sex?” This is to show how she takes charge of the situation, only to fail miserably. In fact, she continues to refer to Newt as Fido. The Suethor isn’t afraid to tell us her Sue was in a bar fight kicking ass, yet she’s also not shy of using the f-word. Graves gets to see her in the locker room shirtless, and she calls him an asshole. There is no focus on the mystery, but instead some random info dump which has nothing to do with the plot, but we also find out that a Aro Volturi shows up. Oh, and there is ball room dancing, and eating of sweets, but the fact Clytemnestra will kick your butt. I’m not talking the kind where she does so simply because you looked at her wrong, but the kind where she does it just because she can.
Origin: So, I went into the story thinking that the problem mentioned in the summary was actually a problem which couldn’t be solved by the canon characters. Only, I found out it actually is. The writer honestly wants the reader to believe the canon characters are incapable of solving a murder mystery.
Special Abilities: She’s the Sherlock Holmes of the wizarding world, or so the writer wants us to believe. That’s at least an awful rating right there. Oh, no wait! I just realized Clytemnestra is a knock off of Phryne Fisher, and Graves has been morphed into Detective Inspector John “Jack” Robinson. Which makes me wonder how Newt of all people became friends with this Clytemnestra, let alone is supposedly okay with being on touching terms with her. Phryne’s character works, but Clytemnestra doesn’t. Phryne’s not in your face like the OC is. Clytemnestra’s just over the top to the point she’s no longer believable.
Notes: The summary makes me cringe. Did you know that there are over three-thousand stories on the pit which use the words love and war in the title or summary? Almost five hundred of those are for the Harry Potter fandom.
Sample:
And now Newt with Tina ,Graves and Picquery are located around a table with pictures of bodies and magical filters trying to find what it is that kills them. Newt looks at the symptoms from the filters but can not find out what is causing it as Picquery with Tina and Graves was looking at the pictures of the bodies.
The corpses were missing the eyes or the tongue from another corpses were missing fingers and ears but the most horrible thing was that some bodies lacked the heart ,ιn the places where the bodies were found, there is a wall on the walls written with blood the word : zaidi
Newt explained that it was a word of Swahili dialect which means monster.
''No great mind has every existed without a touch of mandess''said Picquery as look at the photos and Newt tried to hide the smile from his face but Tina saw and wondered what he may think.
"Ηe's paranoid, obsessed with power. The hunger constantly for what has been denied him. Be it love or revenge ''said Graves and the first day he took the case has thanks Lewis because Gellert Grindelwald is in prison and he can not hurt him anymore
Newt just slammed his hand againt to head as he laughed.'' I think I'm familiar with the type ''
Everyone look at them like he has crazy because they could not believe it that Newt will know a hard and perverted person like the one they try to catch.
''Well ,why do not you ask him to help us?''asked Fontaine but was cautious with it as they could not believe that sweet and shy magicologo would have contact with people.
''Even if I communicate with my friend will not accept as has a hatred for MACUSA and the Magic Ministry''said Newt and continues to look at his papers as he did not want to make an eye contact with them.
''Mister Scamander ,you will get all your friend in on this and if your friend don't answer to money, he will answer to Seraphina Picquery 's wand''said Picquery with a little bit of anger in her voice as she could not understand it would not hear the orders of President Seraphina.
Newt sigh as the President left the room together with Graves and he knew he would not have a good end.