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Sep 20, 2014 14:58

This is a fic for the weekly writing challenge at card-writing.

Title: Forever in a Moment
Fandom: Doctor Who
Pairing: Eleventh Doctor/River Song
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Is impending character death a warning?
Summary: The Doctor Says Goodbye
Prompt: Buffy Titles: Once More With Feeling
Notes: So when I was looking through the list of Buffy titles for a prompt, I saw this one and knew instantly what I wanted to do. I attempted to make it a pretty even mix between angsty and hot. Hope it was at least somewhat successful.



It was finally here. The moment he had been dreading. He wasn’t sure he could do this. He wanted to make it as memorable for her as possible, but he didn’t think he could hide the pain in his hearts. He had known this was coming since the Library. His Tenth self had not really understood what he had lost that day. Now the Doctor knew what he, what the universe had lost. He had lost so many people in his long life. Right now, though, this goodbye felt more painful than any he recalled. He could no longer imagine a universe where she didn’t exist.

River was clearly mesmerized by the sights and sounds around her. The music echoed around the towers. Every note was perfect. The towers swayed in the gentle breeze and glowed in the starlight.

Even with the beauty around them, The Doctor only had eyes for her. Her hair framed her face as it blew in the wind. Her eyes sparkled at the sights before her. The dress she wore clung to her frame. He wanted to lean over and taste the cleavage it revealed. Even with the pain he was feeling, this woman still drove him wild.

“Is something Wrong, Sweetie?” River asked.

“No, River, nothing is wrong. I’ve just missed you,” he replied.

Wanting to stop further questions, he stepped forward and drew her in for a kiss. He buried his hands in her curls and kissed her. He clung to her desperately, drinking in the feel of her lips against his. If this was going to be the last time he tasted her, he wanted to remember it.

River’s left hand reached down to cup him, smirking at him as she did so. He grabbed her hand and pulled it away from him. He was not going to let her set the pace. Not this time. This was the last time he would be able to hold her, so he was going to make it count. He didn’t care at the moment if someone found them here. All that matters was making a memory here with her.

The Doctor moved his lips to her neck, desperate to taste every inch of her body. She leaned into it, content to let him lead for once. She seemed to sense that something about tonight was different for him.

He managed to pull himself away from her for a minute just so he could remove the jacket of the brand new suit he had worn just for tonight. She was smirking at him again as she used the break to slip out of the dress. She was completely naked underneath.

“River, you naughty girl,” he said.

“Oh, yes, Doctor, very naughty. And you wouldn’t have it any other way,” River replied.

River helped him unbutton his shirt. He kicked off his shoes. He was desperate to be naked so he could feel her skin against his. When he was completely undressed, he took her in his arms again and lowered her to the ground.

His lips quickly found hers again. She was in a playful mood, her tongue trying to battle with his. He could only feel pain and need. His hands dragged through her hair. River’s curls were as wild and untamed as she was. She was like no one else he had ever known. He wanted to see her lose control one last time. He wanted to feel and taste her, to make sure he had every inch of her memorized. He wanted to make sure that this last time was perfect for her.

The Doctor’s hands moved to cup her breasts as he moved his lips back to her neck. He stroked over her nipples. River’s head fell back and her eyes closed. He loved the way her body reacted to his touch. She was so responsive. He moved his lips down to her left breast. He cupped it with one hand while his other hand continued to stroke her right breast. She tasted so good. Her ran his tongue over her nipple, feeling it pucker against his mouth. He sucked on it greedily. She was perfect. He switched over to the other breast. Her hands were grasping at the ground beneath them. He nibbled slightly at her nipple, enjoying the moan that escaped her lips.

Eventually he began to move his mouth down her stomach towards his ultimate goal. Her hands had moved to grasp his hair, attempting to urge him lower. He took his time and tried to taste every inch of skin. His hands and then mouth caressed her inner thighs. He wanted her desperate with need when he finally reached her clit.

River moaned again as his fingers pulled apart her folds. He could never get enough of the sound. She was dripping wet. His tongue found her nub and stroked it over and over again. She was writhing against him and gasping. He could tell she was close. He needed to watch his wife come, and he knew exactly how to drive her wild. He used his fingers as well as his tongue, working her closer and closer to orgasm.

River’s body arched when she came. Her whole body was shaking. The Doctor drank in the sight. She was breathtaking like this. His cock was rock hard and yet his hearts only felt pain. It would never be enough, and yet tonight was going to have to last him the rest of his life. She panted as she came down. She was still dripping wet, and he could tell she wanted more.

“I guess it is my turn to return the favor, Sweetie,” she said.

His cock pulsed in interest, but tonight was about her. And all he really wanted to do was be inside of her.

“Not now, River. I want to feel you against me,” he replied.

“Getting bossy, aren’t we, Sweetie? I like this side of you. Maybe I need to figure out how to make you this bossy during sex more often,” she said.

The Doctor slid down on top of her. He could no longer hold back the tears that had been threatening to fall. There would be no “more often” with her. This was the last time. As he entered her, he began to cry. River was too lost in pleasure to notice.

The Doctor made love to her slowly. She kept attempting to speed their pace up, but he wouldn’t let her. He wanted this to last. He angled himself to give her the most pleasure he could. She felt so good. She clenched around him as her body began to writhe again. He finally picked up the pace when he could no longer control himself. As her orgasm hit she clenched his cock tighter, sending him over the edge as well.

“What’s wrong, Sweetie? Why are you crying?” River asked gently as he slipped off of her and wrapped his arms around her waist.

“Nothing’s wrong, River. Can we talk about this later?” He replied.

All he wanted to do was lay here and hold her in his arms. He wanted to stop time and make this moment last forever.
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