Title: Computations of Loss
Pairing/Characters: Millie with a touch of Alan
Rating: T
Summary: Millie’s story in numbers.
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Nope
Notes/Warnings: This is a Wormhole Fic.
Disclaimer: I may own a calculator, but that doesn’t mean I own Numb3rs.
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Computations of Loss )
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I love this installment. It works very well and drew me in. I went past wibble on this and near on to teary.
Only one part threw me. She had told Megan her daughter was born at six something in the morning yet here she wakes up at home in the morning and is holding her dead infant in the evening? I don't think they would let her hold her all day. Just threw me out of the fic for a minute and I figured you might not intend that.
And the end? So Alan. He is such a thoughtful and caring man. You write him so well even when he doesn't say a word.
Wonderful...
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Very uncooperative bunch I tell ya.....
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Don't you just hate when they do that! Geez, think they would listen to their writer, but Noooo they never do!
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How is it you haven't been all this time?
/is perplexed/
I could swear I added you last year.
Sorry about that...
/wanders off scratching head in confusion/
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Now that you've added me, I've added you back. I've been wanting to, but I haven't. I don't know why either.... Aren't we just silly?
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