New Numb3rs Fic

Apr 01, 2007 23:05

Title: Computations of Loss
Pairing/Characters: Millie with a touch of Alan
Rating: T
Summary: Millie’s story in numbers.
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Nope
Notes/Warnings: This is a Wormhole Fic.
Disclaimer: I may own a calculator, but that doesn’t mean I own Numb3rs.

Computations of Loss )

numb3rs: character: millie, numb3rs: series: wormholes

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Assertion philleegirl April 2 2007, 03:07:27 UTC
I know that the celebration fic was supposed to be fun, but I’m in an angst mood still. I did think the idea of looking at it by the ‘numbers’ was very Millie ( ... )

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bucketohearts April 2 2007, 06:20:46 UTC
You certaintly make me smile. I love the in depth look you given into Millie's life. It works so well.

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philleegirl April 3 2007, 03:44:02 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you liked! I'm just really learning to love Millie. Glad it works for you!

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Re: Assertion emmademarais April 3 2007, 03:05:42 UTC
First off, I just wanted to say I love that someone other than me does these long author notes posts. I love hearing about the thoughts behind the stories, so thank you. What you call it is up to you, but I always thought the term Author Notes was rather dull and uninviting.

I love this installment. It works very well and drew me in. I went past wibble on this and near on to teary.

Only one part threw me. She had told Megan her daughter was born at six something in the morning yet here she wakes up at home in the morning and is holding her dead infant in the evening? I don't think they would let her hold her all day. Just threw me out of the fic for a minute and I figured you might not intend that.

And the end? So Alan. He is such a thoughtful and caring man. You write him so well even when he doesn't say a word.

Wonderful...

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Re: Assertion philleegirl April 3 2007, 03:27:36 UTC
I'm so glad that you don't mind me 'borrowing' the idea! I usually have so many things I want to say about a fic, but just don't want to bog down the top. I loved the idea of adding a comment with all those little things.

Ah, I'm so glad you liked it!! A near teary, Emma is something. *hands tissues and cookies*

Duh!! I forgot I put AM. I shall change that to PM, so this works better. I posted them together, but they were written nearly 2 weeks apart. And, I'm terrible about re-reading my own stories!

Aw, thank you!!! I love Alan... esp after this weeks episode. And I just think there is something about Millie and Alan. They are kinda cute together. (My secret to writting Alan is I think would my Dad have done that? If I say yes, then Alan does it.)

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