Title: Computations of Loss
Pairing/Characters: Millie with a touch of Alan
Rating: T
Summary: Millie’s story in numbers.
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Nope
Notes/Warnings: This is a Wormhole Fic.
Disclaimer: I may own a calculator, but that doesn’t mean I own Numb3rs.
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Computations of Loss )
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I love this installment. It works very well and drew me in. I went past wibble on this and near on to teary.
Only one part threw me. She had told Megan her daughter was born at six something in the morning yet here she wakes up at home in the morning and is holding her dead infant in the evening? I don't think they would let her hold her all day. Just threw me out of the fic for a minute and I figured you might not intend that.
And the end? So Alan. He is such a thoughtful and caring man. You write him so well even when he doesn't say a word.
Wonderful...
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Ah, I'm so glad you liked it!! A near teary, Emma is something. *hands tissues and cookies*
Duh!! I forgot I put AM. I shall change that to PM, so this works better. I posted them together, but they were written nearly 2 weeks apart. And, I'm terrible about re-reading my own stories!
Aw, thank you!!! I love Alan... esp after this weeks episode. And I just think there is something about Millie and Alan. They are kinda cute together. (My secret to writting Alan is I think would my Dad have done that? If I say yes, then Alan does it.)
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