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[mykindasong]

Happy Halloween~!

Welcome to the...

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.

Rules are simple, because we like it that way. And I like just copy and pasting~♥ Please to be commenting for yourself and yourself only. If another writer doesn't want to be on here, don't put them here! Also, please

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[anonymous]

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[elanielyn]

elanielyn at onionlullabys

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[anonymous]

I actually stumbled onto your fics by accident, and even though none of it was for any of the pairings I usually read, I still enjoyed it very much! I also admire you so much for being one of the few writers in the fandom that I've been able to find that actually writes truly kinky porn.

The only criticism I can possibly offer is that sometimes your writing feels oddly stiff. In some fics, you seemed to be lacking fluidity in places that really kind of need it. But even that doesn't really detract from how good the fics are overall.

Keep doing what you're doing!

[death_note13]

Elllllly ♥

I really love your fics ♥ And that's not just because you own my soul :D Because you really do have talent. ♥

Now, because this is a concrit meme, I'll give you some XP

When I first gave my soul to you; I loved your style then; but that was just well...porn. xD And you write a lot of porn; (not a bad thing btw) but then, I suppose porn must be easier to write? Not that you write too much kinky porn; but write non-porny stuff too, Ely >.> that sounds completely weird coming from meAnd you claim your stuff is stupid, it's not. Don't say it's stupid, because it's faaaaaaaaaaaar from stupid. Your grammar and sentence structure is a bit off sometimes, but that's totally okay, because it doesn't take away from what you're writing. ♥ And you know I'll help you when you need it, because your writing is amazing

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[sou_kiri]

CONCRIT IS WHAT YOU'LL GET *attempt at looking threatening/serious

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[anonymous]

I absolutely adore your fics. Like the other anon said, you may write pairings I usually don't read, but I will read because you wrote them so wonderfully. You are also the only writer who writes kinks well and has actually researched those kinks