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The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.
Rules are simple, because we like it that way. And I like just copy and pasting~♥ Please to be commenting for yourself and yourself only. If another writer doesn't want to be on here, don't put them here! Also, please ( Read more... )
Welcome to the...
The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.
Rules are simple, because we like it that way. And I like just copy and pasting~♥ Please to be commenting for yourself and yourself only. If another writer doesn't want to be on here, don't put them here! Also, please ( Read more... )
I really love your fics ♥ And that's not just because you own my soul :D Because you really do have talent. ♥
Now, because this is a concrit meme, I'll give you some XP
When I first gave my soul to you; I loved your style then; but that was just well...porn. xD And you write a lot of porn; (not a bad thing btw) but then, I suppose porn must be easier to write? Not that you write too much kinky porn; but write non-porny stuff too, Ely >.> that sounds completely weird coming from me
And you claim your stuff is stupid, it's not. Don't say it's stupid, because it's faaaaaaaaaaaar from stupid. Your grammar and sentence structure is a bit off sometimes, but that's totally okay, because it doesn't take away from what you're writing. ♥ And you know I'll help you when you need it, because your writing is amazing ♥
Other crit I could give you...uh...
OH. Uh :D just because you claim your English is bad, doesn't mean you can't play around with sentence structure. Not all English sentences are cut and dry, so don't be afraid to play with them :D
Other than that, I have no crit, other than 1. Write me something about the end of the world like Christmas Morning and 2. FIGHTCLUB PIN DUUUUUUUUUUDE PRZ ♥
♥ :D
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