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[mykindasong]

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The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.

Rules are simple, because we like it that way. And I like just copy and pasting~♥ Please to be commenting for yourself and yourself only. If another writer doesn't want to be on here, don't put them here! Also, please

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[anonymous]

I absolutely adore your fics. Like the other anon said, you may write pairings I usually don't read, but I will read because you wrote them so wonderfully. You are also the only writer who writes kinks well and has actually researched those kinks.
There are two things I can offer criticism on. First off all the occasional loss of grammar. It is understandable since English isn't your first language, but it is something you need to watch out for (or ask your beta to specifically watch out for). Secondly occasionally your situations don't add up. What I mean by that is that sometimes when you write out a scenario where they are for example in position A where you cannot physically do action B without changing position or doing something, you describe in detail position A and then suddenly they are doing action B. Basically watch out that what you write is actually possible and you didn't leave out a step in the process.
You don't do either of these things very often but they can be disturbing when you do come across them (especially the second one), so it is something you could watch out for.
Please keep writing your amazing fics ♥