Too Close For Comfort
Title: Too Close For Comfort
Pairing(s): Yesung/Sungmin
Rating: R
Genre: ...Non-graphic smut, at least.
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief, no one owns them.
Warning: PWP; tease!Sungmin, whipped!Jongwoon; what else is new?
Summary: In Sungmin’s opinion, one can always make time for sex, so what’s wrong with a quick dalliance in an elevator?
( However, when Sungmin’s hand traversed to the front of his jeans; that was when Jongwoon knew for sure that Sungmin’s actions were calculated and not unintentional like Jongwoon had originally thought. )
Pairing(s): Yesung/Sungmin
Rating: R
Genre: ...Non-graphic smut, at least.
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief, no one owns them.
Warning: PWP; tease!Sungmin, whipped!Jongwoon; what else is new?
Summary: In Sungmin’s opinion, one can always make time for sex, so what’s wrong with a quick dalliance in an elevator?
( However, when Sungmin’s hand traversed to the front of his jeans; that was when Jongwoon knew for sure that Sungmin’s actions were calculated and not unintentional like Jongwoon had originally thought. )
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Will read later...>.
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This is hawt!!!!!!! Starting from the elevator scene....GOD!!! Sungmin is so naughty!!! But I love that image of Min anyway...and a whipped Yesung..LOL!!! That's so adorable..(though you know,,I want my bias to top next time..xDD!! Yes..Im officially asking for a part 2 :D)
And the scene after that.......Oh god Ain!!! Never in my wildest imagination did I foresee you writing something like this..(This just proves you're the most pervert of us after all..xDDD!! jkjk) This is seriously good,,though I LOL at the image at the end...it really fits!! Now go and make that cosplay fic..I want your OT3 to appear there..xDD!!
Love this Ain~
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LMAO!! That's why I vowed never to write smut...I think I'll just embarrass myself to death :D Yeah,,Yesung seems pretty whipped whenever's Min's there..(Yo Sungmin!! You're the boss...xDDD!!)
Yeah,,its just a mild BJ compared to what I've read before :D Can't wait for that OT3!!!
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Anyway, I wanted to reply earlier, but you know.. Livejournal has failed on us.
When reading this I was like Kangin when he noticed that the peppermintball was actually a 100% pure salt ballxD I seriously looked the same as he was at that point ROFL.
The toiletscene is a little.. disturbing thoughxD [em]"“I had a stomach ache so I rushed over here...”"[/em] <- WHY WOUKD YOU ANSWER THAT LOL!!!! LOLLLLL!!! That wouldn't really lighten the mood for meXD But I guess that makes Sungmin weird? XD Still making moves in the elevator after that ROFLMAO. No really, I giggled and re-read that part 40 times XD Then I went Kangin-reaction-and-face-mode as described before ( ... )
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Jongwoon had dragged them into for a serious discussion about Sungmin’s inappropriate behaviour... WHICH FAILED SO BADLY!!!!! LMAO it's kinda sad how whipped Jongwoon is, and how aware Sungmin is of the fact.
Ah Jongwoon... put Min on a schedule, why don't you? Such a responsible hyung he is. xP
I've enjoyed this immensely - perverted fangirl is perverted. /bricked... also <3 the last scene, since I have images. So fitting... yup, he looks ill. Poor Yeh. *wink*
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...Yeah, Jongwoon pretty much fails at being the 'responsible/in control' hyung. As seen in EHB lol. In there, Jongwoon follows Sungmin unquestioningly most of the time, it's pretty funny. XDDD
Sungmin will get what he wants, schedules be damned. ;> ...At least Jongwoon tried.
You did? I'm really glad! Since after all, you pretty much inspired me to write this smut fic with your images and all. :'D The last scene...Jongwoon and Sungmin really do look drained and satisfied respectively. *coughs* Also; *bows down to crack/smut idol* ;~~~~~;
Thank you for reading and commenting! :D
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Yup, at least he tries. He still does, I've seen him trying at a recent show where Leeteuk and Heechul were missing... he went "So, since I'm the eldest everyone should..." - queue Eunhyuk, Donghae, Shindong, Sungmin and Kyuhyun spontaneously turning away with some sorta "I dunno this guy" expression. I dunno how much of that was fake, but if it wasn't... sad. Really, really sad.. *hugs Yeh* Ryeowook and Siwon weren't there so I dunno how'd they react. ^^;
I wish I could write serious smut, but if I did it'd probably either turn out way too kinky and I'd die of embarrassment or really... personality-less. Probably the second. Heck, I wish I could write serious fics, but I can't... *bows down to the respective writer*
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Oh. Poor Yesung. ;~~~~~; I do think they show their affection towards him by teasing him like that, but it's still...rather demoralising for him. :'< I mean, since he's already so insecure as it is and all.
I know right? How do people write serious smut anyway? Or at least, make it sound realistic and not like some porn show or something. .______________. Sometimes people get too carried away with the kinks...yeah. It's still fun to read though! *gets bricked* Oh you! :'DDD I think you're more inclined to write awesome crack/humour so you shouldn't fret so much about it! ^^
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and i agree abt the pic lmao.yesun tired face and minnie satisfied one lmao.
You do awesome job bb!
Cantwait fr another yemin fic from u! Kkk
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We should all just thank deemonic for the images. XD Yesung looks especially exhausted and Sungmin looks pretty smug so... ;>
Thank you so much for the encouragement! :>>> I always have YeMin fic ideas, so it's only a matter if I can expand on them and finish typing them lol! XD
Thank you for reading and commenting! :D
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