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noteinabottle

numbers-- one-shot

Sep 07, 2011 22:35

Title: Numbers
Rating: K+
Summary: Sanghyun loves numbers.
Pairing: Slight Joon/Cheondoong/Mir - Cheondoong-centric
Disclaimer: Don't own the boys, only the plot.
Author's note: A little something I came up with. Comments are nice!

( Unbeknownst to many, Sanghyun likes counting. )

ship:joon/cheondoong/mir, category:mblaq, rating:k+, fic:numbers

Comments 8

yjhjhsjs September 7 2011, 18:26:09 UTC

Changsun collects him in his arms that night, and suddenly, Sanghyun feels that everything might just be alright. <<<< JoonDoong!!!
i love it the way you described how hard Doongie had to go through to be CheonDoong of MBLAQ..

HOMFG I LIKE THE Five is MBLAQ!!!!
THE SITUATION HOMFG!! I CANT EVEN IT WAS SO HEARTWARMING AND THAT IS SO MBLAQ!!
SeungHo with his iPad and G.O is like a umma, concerns bout his kids and Joonie being a Joonie and Doongie with his PSP in his own thought and Mir being a Mir, clingy to his hyung and leader-nim bullying the maknae, HOMFG MBLAQ IS SO PRECIOUS!

Four if for family. Dad, mum and his two older sisters <<< HOMFG THIS! THIS IS WORTH :")

the three part is amazing! HOMFG WAE YOU SO AWESOME??

Joonie+maknae line is the amazing thing ever! Mir is so insanely cute!

ILOVEYOUMISSWRITERBECAUSEYOUWROTETHISDOONGIECENTRICBECAUSEILOVEDOONGIE <3 :D

noteinabottle September 8 2011, 01:14:04 UTC

Aww thank you (: and your comment made my day! It's my first time trying a Cheondoong-centric fic so it's good that you like it >___<

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granitemouth September 8 2011, 03:00:43 UTC

You really have a way with endings:

"Coming!" he calls back, because such times were unlimited in his book of numbers; he had scratched an infinity sign next to the word "Happiness".

Like, bb, how do you do it? I'm at work and I'm feeling butterflies in my stomach the moment I read that last word.

*sigh*

I love it. The perspective, emotions, the numbers especially the infinity and rainbow story. ^^ I have a Thunder-centric fic in the making too, though a bit angsty. I hope you can give me your two cents about it in the future.

Again and again, great work! I'm a fan!

noteinabottle September 8 2011, 03:59:19 UTC

Of course I would be honored to help you out (: just leave me a spot in the comments! And maybe PM me when you get the fic up, I'm supposed to be going on hiatus soon T____T

You really have a way with endings
You flatter me so. I'm actually really bad at them, and I think I had to rewrite the ending a few times just to get it right. Glad you liked it though!

And lastly, as a huge thank you:

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granitemouth September 9 2011, 04:09:38 UTC

Oh hi thar cutie Dododoong~ Your attempt at scary is still adorable. Sorry. XD

I'll try to write them down this weekend and let you know, then? I've been off writing for quite sometime, I just don't know how to start again.

Don't stooooooop~ we need more of your stories. /clings

Anyhow *sniff* I'm very particular with endings because I feel that if a story is a circle, this is the single point that completes the the shape. So when I write, I have to rewrite several times the ending just to make it 'sound right'. So I'm glad to know I'm not alone. Keep up the great work!

*hug*

noteinabottle September 9 2011, 05:54:55 UTC

*hugs back*

Looking forward to your fic!!! All da best (:

redstar416 September 24 2011, 06:14:05 UTC

WHAT IS HAPPENING?! Almost all the MBLAQ fics I'm reading have plots that are about them being happy in their life! But I like it! At least I know that someone also cares about them and wants them to be happy.
I won't be quoting any lines because the whole story is worth quoting!
Thank you so much!
♥♥♥♥♥

noteinabottle September 24 2011, 12:14:32 UTC

And thank you (: glad you liked it!