Well, I was in favor of leaving it, but I recognize now that in the long run it is probably best to go in favor of implied loins, and revise to substitute a less problematic word.
As
moriarty6 so deftly
pointed out, loins should probably be hinted at. Left hovering on the periphery, as it were. Not jutting obscenely from the page like the spring-loaded
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