This Christmas

[i_i_i_dunno]

Title: This Christmas
Author: i_i_i_dunno
Rating & Warnings: PG I think for a tiny bit of swearing.
Prompts:
toys

and

Said the king to the people everywhere,
Listen to what I say
Pray for peace, people everywhere!
Listen to what I say

- Do You Hear What I Hear? - Noel Regney and Gloria Shayne

Word Count: 2586
Summary: An unexpected visitor makes an

Comments

[seer_of_spots]

Haha! This is absolutely gorgeous!

Really lovely and light; very Christmas-y. I'm so glad that Furby got a run in there - my parents never let me have one (and I must admit I'm quite glad they never did) but heaps of my friends used to have them. And they were so annoying.

I loved the remote-control helicopter for Mr Weasley; a perfect gift.

“And what is that ridiculous thing around his neck? We know his name is King, does he have to wear a necklace stating that so he himself doesn't forget? And why is his shirt so big? I know good muggle music and this certainly isn't...”
Ah, love Kingsley.

“You guys have that earring in common. I figured if you ever decided being an Auror wasn't for you, you could just drop your pants a bit, cut the S-L-E-Y from your name and turn into him.Ah, love Tonks

[i_i_i_dunno]

Yeah I had a Furby. I took it's battery out after two days. Most annoying thing ever.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, was kinda nervous for my first foray into fanfic writing. =D

[gppr]

Oh my! that was perfect! The gifts were hilarious and I loved what you chose for Remus' gift. Very nice. :D

[i_i_i_dunno]

Thanks! I'm really happy you enjoyed it.

[merryb87]

Remus the rapper? Oh god, the funnies attack.
"M to the double O to the N to they Y! Slim Shady got nothin' on this werewolf, WORD UP! Fo' Sizzle. "

Anyway funny story, especially about that Remus wanting a shot at stardom via rapping, and Sirius and his furby! I loved the ending though very sweet. :)

[i_i_i_dunno]

Haha I could just picture his whole selling point being the whole werewolf thing. And his raps would have perfect grammar and sound like poetry over a hip-hop beat.
I would buy all his albums =D

Thanks for your wonderful comment!

[merryb87]

Well yes of course, he wanted to teach too! So not only did he rap about being a lonely/heart worn werewolf, he did raps such as "A square and B square is C square" (big number 1) and of course his favorite Shakespeare.

I would buy all his albums too!

[i_i_i_dunno]

Seems like it would be a good way to study for a test. I know I would never forget any math formulas that Remus rapped to me =D

[bookish_brownie]

I also loved the idea of Remus becoming a rapper. It was hilarious. I like the opening paragraph, too. The whole story was really sweet.

[i_i_i_dunno]

Thanks very much!

[philotic_net]

“Santa Claus?” Sirius' sceptical voice attracted the attention of everyone else in the room…. “Oh. It's just Tonks.”

Its not often you get a full morph out of Tonks in a story. Usually you just see changes to her hair or eyes or something. Turning into Santa was a very clever use of her powers and a very Tonksy action to me. Its pretty funny Remus still finds her attractive as a fat old man. ;) It must be true love.

...” Tonks screwed up her face and Remus was suddenly standing next to a skinnier, and decidedly sexier, Santa.

haha, I bet she was pretty cute in her Santa costume. Eat your heart out, Remus!

I loved all the muggle gifts, especially the helicopter (so perfect for Arthur) and Sirius’ reaction to the Furby was hilarious.

“Uh, Remus...” Remus' breath caught in his chest. She had moved her lips close to his ear and whispered into it. He could feel the tingle of her words, of his name coming so gently from her lips, on his ear.
“Yes?” he responded hoarsely. Very sexy passage. It’s cute to see Remus so flustered by her

[i_i_i_dunno]

Remus is very sexy in your story (as he should be.)

Heh I'm glad you thought so.

Thanks for your wonderful comments!