This Christmas

[i_i_i_dunno]

Title: This Christmas
Author: i_i_i_dunno
Rating & Warnings: PG I think for a tiny bit of swearing.
Prompts:
toys

and

Said the king to the people everywhere,
Listen to what I say
Pray for peace, people everywhere!
Listen to what I say

- Do You Hear What I Hear? - Noel Regney and Gloria Shayne

Word Count: 2586
Summary: An unexpected visitor makes an

Comments

[philotic_net]

“Santa Claus?” Sirius' sceptical voice attracted the attention of everyone else in the room…. “Oh. It's just Tonks.”

Its not often you get a full morph out of Tonks in a story. Usually you just see changes to her hair or eyes or something. Turning into Santa was a very clever use of her powers and a very Tonksy action to me. Its pretty funny Remus still finds her attractive as a fat old man. ;) It must be true love.

...” Tonks screwed up her face and Remus was suddenly standing next to a skinnier, and decidedly sexier, Santa.

haha, I bet she was pretty cute in her Santa costume. Eat your heart out, Remus!

I loved all the muggle gifts, especially the helicopter (so perfect for Arthur) and Sirius’ reaction to the Furby was hilarious.

“Uh, Remus...” Remus' breath caught in his chest. She had moved her lips close to his ear and whispered into it. He could feel the tingle of her words, of his name coming so gently from her lips, on his ear.
“Yes?” he responded hoarsely.

Very sexy passage. It’s cute to see Remus so flustered by her closeness. And whenever Remus says anything, it’s ten times better if it’s said “hoarsely” tehehe. Also, Remus in a coyboy hat is sexy. Hmmm, I guess I am just trying to say Remus is very sexy in your story (as he should be.)

This story was funny and sweet and clever. I enjoyed it very much. Great job.

[i_i_i_dunno]

Remus is very sexy in your story (as he should be.)

Heh I'm glad you thought so.

Thanks for your wonderful comments!