This Christmas

Dec 15, 2007 20:38

Title: This Christmas
Author: i_i_i_dunno
Rating & Warnings: PG I think for a tiny bit of swearing.
Prompts:
toys

and

Said the king to the people everywhere,
Listen to what I say
Pray for peace, people everywhere!
Listen to what I say

- Do You Hear What I Hear? - Noel Regney and Gloria Shayne

Word Count: 2586
Summary: An unexpected visitor makes an ( Read more... )

winter wonderland advent, general, humour, i_i_i_dunno

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seer_of_spots December 16 2007, 02:33:35 UTC
Haha! This is absolutely gorgeous!

Really lovely and light; very Christmas-y. I'm so glad that Furby got a run in there - my parents never let me have one (and I must admit I'm quite glad they never did) but heaps of my friends used to have them. And they were so annoying.

I loved the remote-control helicopter for Mr Weasley; a perfect gift.

“And what is that ridiculous thing around his neck? We know his name is King, does he have to wear a necklace stating that so he himself doesn't forget? And why is his shirt so big? I know good muggle music and this certainly isn't...”
Ah, love Kingsley.

“You guys have that earring in common. I figured if you ever decided being an Auror wasn't for you, you could just drop your pants a bit, cut the S-L-E-Y from your name and turn into him.
Ah, love Tonks.

And the little bit afterwards with Remus considering a new profession - hilarious.

I really like this. It's very funny, nice and concise, and just bursting with Christmas spirit. And the little moments between Remus and Tonks at the beginning and end of the story really round everything off nicely.

Great work!

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i_i_i_dunno December 16 2007, 03:43:46 UTC
Yeah I had a Furby. I took it's battery out after two days. Most annoying thing ever.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it, was kinda nervous for my first foray into fanfic writing. =D

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