Jared's Ghost (3/3)

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Comments

[harrigan]

It's wonderful to see other lands and cultures and crises explored in fic. The estrangement between Jensen and Jared was portrayed very effectively; made it feel even more urgent than if they'd been been perfectly happy with each other. Worth waiting for!

[lyryk]

I'm glad to hear that the story and the setting worked for you. Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback. :-)

[marlowe78]

Hey there

[lyryk]

I'm sorry you found the story so disappointing, but thank you for the honest review.

[meesasometimes]

you're always so good with, well, everything. :) It all just unfolded with such clarity and even tho there was a sense of urgency, there was also a calm. does that make sense? I think it's that you're such a confident writer. I appreciated that uncertainty with each other at the end of this, it rang so true. ♥

[lyryk]

I'm not as confident as I may appear to be. :-) But your lovely comments are always encouraging, so thank youuuuu. ♥ I think I mostly just wanted to write about a difficult, everyday sort of relationship, and I'm glad you think it rings true. :-)

[crimsonepitaph]

Great story. Interesting. Different. Wonderfully written, especially in terms of dealing with the main characters and their relationship - there was a quiet intensity about all of it that I loved.

[lyryk]

Thanks so much! I didn't want their relationship to lose focus during the events of the story, so I'm especially happy to hear that you liked that part. :-)

[ayane42]

i really loved this story!! so tense!! eeee, i was worried for Jared, and Jensen trying so hard to find him.

and then at the end, their relationship had been so strained, the "are we are or aren't we", then finally they talked!! yay!!

awesome story!!

[lyryk]

Thanks so much for the lovely comment. It totally made me smile. :-) So glad you liked!

Your icon is so pretty. <3