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The Lost Fic Battle 2009

Jan 18, 2009 17:00

Lost Fic Battle!!!!

I managed to get the prompt list in order much faster than I thought, so it's finally here!

( 1077 Prompts Under the Cut! )

lost fic battle 2009

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OMG I LOVE YOU SERIOUSLY. janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 17:10:33 UTC

LOL, I can't believe you started with this one but OMG, you wrote Scott/Steve!!!!!!!!! And it's absolutely wonderful! Oh, they are so, so cute here. Poor Scott, now I argue that Steve needs to die too so that they can be afterlife boyfriends for eternity. ;) This was such a sweet piece and you did a great job with the both of them. Aw, how just damn lovely are those two together. I absolutely love this!! ♥ ♥

[well, now I'll write the tentacular sex soon. ;) ;)]

Re: Some Wishes Come True, Scott/Steve, the night before Flight 815, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 20:17:48 UTC

Jeez, points for originality here. I don't know why I never thought of them before, but I'm glad someone did because this is just lovely. Wonderful work!

Re: Some Wishes Come True, Scott/Steve, the night before Flight 815, PG-13 missy_useless January 18 2009, 20:50:32 UTC

Lol. This is too great. Never thought of this pairing, so thanks to the one who prompted it (was it janie?) and thanks for writing it. Wonderful!

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What works best, Boone/Jack, there's more to life than finding pens, PG13 janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 17:46:14 UTC

Jack feels bad. Really, he feels bad. Fine, he has his reasons. Boone was doing everything wrong and he didn't need anyone in the way; when he had told him to go get the pens, it was just because then he'd have been alone and also because he hadn't really thought that he would actually do it.

Wrong. Because then Boone had found him with the goddamn pens. They were all carefully held in his hand; Jack had distinguished two fountain pens, three sharpies, six ballpoint ones and then he had realized, looking better at it, that Boone had actually divided them; all the fountain ones were near each other as the sharpies and the ballpoint ones. And then ( ... )

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Re: What works best, Boone/Jack, there's more to life than finding pens, PG13 janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 18:22:33 UTC

Thank you! Oh, YES. Indeed. That's my OTP, I wish myself there was more around. ;)

Re: What works best, Boone/Jack, there's more to life than finding pens, PG13 gottalovev January 19 2009, 19:41:09 UTC

heee! I love this! Jack acknowledging he was kind of a jerk, Boone that doesn't resent him the least and is predictably self-depreciating... very good! =D

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Re: Helping Hand, Sawyer/Shannon, helping hand, PG13 janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 18:22:04 UTC

Oh, this was so nice! Definitely naughty enough for those two I have to say. And YES for Boone playing boy scout with Jack *cough* erm okay, that wasn't meant to sound like it sounds. And you write Shannon so well!

Re: Helping Hand, Sawyer/Shannon, helping hand, PG13 jenthegypsy January 24 2009, 19:06:56 UTC

Niiiiiiiice!

Re: Helping Hand, Sawyer/Shannon, helping hand, PG13 crickets January 18 2009, 18:58:18 UTC

Very sexy! Love this! (Wow season one seems so long ago!)

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Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 20:15:36 UTC

Juliet doesn’t know why she didn’t see it before. The hair, the eyes, the way the woman smiles. There’s a picture in the back of her mind, and a name, a connection, resting on the tip of her tongue but she can’t quite force it out. Up until now, as the woman rolls out of the bed, shame and embarrassment coloring her face in a way that Juliet expected. She doesn’t care. The part of her that cared about those things left her long ago ( ... )

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 20:39:51 UTC

Oh wow, this was excellently done. You totally sold me the pairing and it'd be a hard one. You did a great job with the connections here and your Juliet voice is just incredible. The last line works so well, too. Great work!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 20:40:55 UTC

Thanks hun! I saw this prompt and the idea just came right away. Glad you liked it!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 siluria January 18 2009, 21:08:54 UTC

Lost connections make this so easy to imagine and I think you handled it very well indeed!

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Watchin' Over You, Jack/Juliet, pregnancy and/or babies phelipa January 18 2009, 20:43:28 UTC

He hears her name tossed around casually at the nurses' station in the ER and shrugs it off, determined to continue on with his day as planned. They say it again, paired with the words ‘Man named Sawyer’, and before he can stop himself he’s approaching them and asking where she is ( ... )

Re: Watchin' Over You, Jack/Juliet, pregnancy and/or babies siluria January 18 2009, 21:10:57 UTC

Although I'm dying to know what happened with Sawyer, I do like the chance meeting here :) I can totally see a nervous Jack shifting at the end of the bed not knowing exactly what to do.

Re: Watchin' Over You, Jack/Juliet, pregnancy and/or babies phelipa January 18 2009, 22:13:57 UTC

Thank you :D

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