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The Lost Fic Battle 2009

Jan 18, 2009 17:00

Lost Fic Battle!!!!

I managed to get the prompt list in order much faster than I thought, so it's finally here!

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Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 20:15:36 UTC

Juliet doesn’t know why she didn’t see it before. The hair, the eyes, the way the woman smiles. There’s a picture in the back of her mind, and a name, a connection, resting on the tip of her tongue but she can’t quite force it out. Up until now, as the woman rolls out of the bed, shame and embarrassment coloring her face in a way that Juliet expected. She doesn’t care. The part of her that cared about those things left her long ago ( ... )

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 janie_tangerine January 18 2009, 20:39:51 UTC

Oh wow, this was excellently done. You totally sold me the pairing and it'd be a hard one. You did a great job with the connections here and your Juliet voice is just incredible. The last line works so well, too. Great work!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 20:40:55 UTC

Thanks hun! I saw this prompt and the idea just came right away. Glad you liked it!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 siluria January 18 2009, 21:08:54 UTC

Lost connections make this so easy to imagine and I think you handled it very well indeed!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 21:09:51 UTC

I love Lost connections; it makes writing weird pairings so much fun. Glad you liked this! Thanks!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 missy_useless January 18 2009, 21:33:07 UTC

This is totally incredible! *is speechless* You definitely broke my heart with this, seriously. Plus, your way of writing Juliet is amazing. Thanks for sharing!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 18 2009, 21:35:46 UTC

Aw, I'm glad you liked this! Thanks!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 eponine119 January 19 2009, 01:31:15 UTC

I love this! The whole thing, but especially this paragraph which kind of brings it all together.

So this is the woman who started all of this. Because if it wasn’t for her then Ben never would’ve seen the similarities between her and Juliet, never would’ve sent Juliet in there to interrogate Jack, to play his games for him. Things might have been different, had it not been for her. That void in her heart and in her mind might feel a little less empty if it didn’t know what it was missing.

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 19 2009, 04:48:22 UTC

It is very interesting to me, in some ways, that without Sarah there is this whole storyline (okay, put in those terms for us anyway) that wouldn't exist. It's why I loved this prompt.

I'm glad you liked this! Thanks!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 gottalovev January 19 2009, 19:47:01 UTC

ohhhh that is fascinating. I would never have thought of those two, but you make it work so well, especially as Juliet doesn't know it's Sarah until the end. well done!

Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 19 2009, 20:54:19 UTC

I never thought of them either, until I saw the prompt, and then it just made sense. I'm glad you liked this! Thanks hun!

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Re: Until One Of Us Makes The Other One Come True, Juliet/Sarah, commonality, PG-13 slybrunette January 20 2009, 15:18:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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