Comments | liritarofrohan: Fic: Enchanted

liritarofrohan

Fic: Enchanted

Jul 29, 2007 14:57

Title: Enchanted
Author: Liritar
Pairing: Mohinder/Matt
Rating: PG 13
Summary: Mohinder and Molly spend much time in a hospital waiting room, and Mohinder thinks. A lot.
Spoilers: Season Finale.
A/N: Written for the rare_heroes Brave New Ship Challenge. Tetris is in homage to Nuclear Family by greatwhitesnark. Because it was just that good.

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slash, heroes, fic

Comments 71

veetvoojagig July 29 2007, 20:42:39 UTC

Still as lovely as it was when you started writing it. *Grins* You rock my socks.

liritarofrohan July 29 2007, 20:44:58 UTC

Really? Your socks?

veetvoojagig July 29 2007, 20:45:49 UTC

Yep. Unfortunately I'm not wearing any, so you're screwed. You rock nothing.

liritarofrohan July 29 2007, 20:46:42 UTC

You're a fucking whore. *Laughs and hugs*

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kattahj July 29 2007, 21:38:56 UTC

Aw, sweetness! I like Matt's reactions to Mohinder's thoughts, and Molly taking to the "game" so instantly (of course she would *g*). I'd love to see more of this.

liritarofrohan July 29 2007, 21:43:30 UTC

Aw, thanks. And yeah, I've been thinking I might try a sequel to this sometime.

greatwhitesnark July 29 2007, 23:49:14 UTC

Aw, Molly's so sweet. And Matt's responses to Mohinder's thoughts were just priceless. I liked this quite a bit. Is there any possibility of more of this in the future? Oh, and Tetris FTW!

liritarofrohan July 29 2007, 23:57:36 UTC

*Giggles* I have NEVER been able to get "Micah cheats at Tetris" out of my head.

And yes, there's a possibility of more. It's in the list of fifty million things I want to write now. *Laughs*

greatwhitesnark July 30 2007, 00:36:52 UTC

That line was the entire reason I wrote "Nuclear Family." It wouldn't get out of my head until I came up with a fic to put it in.

I'd love to read more, but I completely understand what it's like to have a whole bunch of fics on a To Do List. *Glance at gigantic pile of fics he needs to write* I should really get started on my own fic for Brave New Ship what with the deadline being so very close.

And I forgot to mention it before, but I loved Niki's line about Matt being hard to kill. Good stuff.

liritarofrohan July 30 2007, 00:41:30 UTC

*Laughs* I can believe that. Actually, once I started a story for a line, then wasn't able to work that line in, since the mood changed on me.

It's definitely high on the list. The only ones higher are the ones I'm actually have in progress. And I think it's a bit higher than one of them. *Laughs* I'll get to it.

Oh, thanks. I'm really glad it occurred to me to have Niki and Micah in this fic. They added a dynamic that I wasn't aware I'd been missing till I saw it. *Grins*

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liritarofrohan July 30 2007, 00:27:37 UTC

*Laughs* Well, I do tend to have a strong inner Matt when I try to write fic with him in it. *Winks*

Sequel will be thought about. Promise.

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liritarofrohan July 30 2007, 00:59:53 UTC

Strangely enough, I saw it RIGHT after I finished writing this. *Grins* Gods, that was beautiful.

eonism July 30 2007, 00:28:04 UTC

Oh, so good. Great characterizations, and you totally made me see Matt/Mo as a possibility, which I've never been able to get my head around before. Loved it, :)

liritarofrohan July 30 2007, 00:29:49 UTC

Thanks so much, and I'm honored that I could change your oppinions on the pairing. *Grins*