dun dun dun dun... more on "Dragon Dreams"
Dear Body,
I know you're overdue for a sick leave since June, but must you invite multiple sicknesses at the same time?
First there was the cracked molar, then there's the sore throat and persistent cold. Must you add nosebleed to the mix?
And while I'm at it, please to be losing those four kilos of extra baggage.
That is all.
Brain
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I know you're overdue for a sick leave since June, but must you invite multiple sicknesses at the same time?
First there was the cracked molar, then there's the sore throat and persistent cold. Must you add nosebleed to the mix?
And while I'm at it, please to be losing those four kilos of extra baggage.
That is all.
Brain
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I know the beginning of "Dragon Dreams" is slow, but I really don't know how to fix it >_> *was too tired after the major rehaul from the original 2000-word version*
I don`t like two nouns in a title all that much usually.
Ah, any particular reason why? The reason I prefer two words in the title is to parallel "Dragon Dreams."
Plus I love double meaning--> "Dragon Dreams" can mean either dreams about dragons or a dragon that dreams.
"Dreams Captive" can mean:
1. Dream (Morpheus)'s captive (i.e., Draco)
2. ...Hmmm, actually that should be "Dreams Captivate" or "Dreams Capture," huh. *ponders*
For something completely different I just thought about "(Bound To or Visiting or Hiding With) Death`s Little Brother"
X-D
Parentheses might work. I'd have to think on this some more...
Now that you asked for my input, you have to live with it ;-)
*g* Noted. It amuses me how there are no two same votes--it's like people not voting for the two primary candidates but writing in different names in their ballot X-D
But I`m still happy to be your friend. Really. ;-)
Well, I'm happy that you're happy *winks back*
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