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Title: Silent Hill: The Unmaker's Pit
Rating: M (attempted horror and some gore)
Pairing/Characters: Jazz, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, Bluestreak, Perceptor, Hound, Cliffjumper, Beachcomber
Warnings: Attempted horror and gore, character deaths, friendships/obsessions that might hint at slash if you want to
Disclaimer: Do not own.
A/N: Final part. Here are ( Read more... )
Rating: M (attempted horror and some gore)
Pairing/Characters: Jazz, Sunstreaker, Sideswipe, Bluestreak, Perceptor, Hound, Cliffjumper, Beachcomber
Warnings: Attempted horror and gore, character deaths, friendships/obsessions that might hint at slash if you want to
Disclaimer: Do not own.
A/N: Final part. Here are ( Read more... )
First of all, let me say that I love how you go from the present to the past and back again. It was an excellent way to handle the story.
Optimus had a flitting thought that maybe it would’ve been better if they had died.
This is heartbreaking because it's so true. It would have been better if they had died; I hate myself for thinking that and Optimus probably hate himself too.
“These mechs are more than just comrades. They are our friends, and I refuse to give up on them now that we got them back.”
Taking care of them is going to be so hard and as much as they say now that they won't give up, I wonder how they will feels years from now. Will they have lost all hope by then? Be so tired of being responsible for the care of ( ... )
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I wonder how they will feels years from now. Will they have lost all hope by then? Be so tired of being responsible for the care of those that will never heal?
Maybe they could find a little asylum for them? Prowl and Mirage and Bumblebee are some that I think will never really lose the hope of them getting better. Which is sad cause they'll be spending the rest of their lives waiting for something that won't happen. Ratchet is more of a realist, but something tells me he wouldn't stop trying to find a way to fix them.
Great, now I want to write a oneshot with Mirage and Prowl taking care of Jazz and Hound after years of having rescued them. *dies*
Was there a reason Perceptor wasn't mentioned here?
The only reason I can find is that I'm an idiot that needs to keep better track of the characters I'm using. Please forgive me? *puppy eyes*
Does Jazz realize he's not human anymore? He seems too out of it to notice, I think, so it ( ... )
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Nope, I don't mind. I love long replies.
Maybe they could find a little asylum for them? Prowl and Mirage and Bumblebee are some that I think will never really lose the hope of them getting better. Which is sad cause they'll be spending the rest of their lives waiting for something that won't happen. Ratchet is more of a realist, but something tells me he wouldn't stop trying to find a way to fix them.
It's very sad. They'll just keep hoping and hoping and hoping and no one would have the heart to tell them that there is no hope.
And yes, Ratchet would never stop trying.
Great, now I want to write a oneshot with Mirage and Prowl taking care of Jazz and Hound after years of having rescued them. *dies*
Don't die! *calls Ratchet* You need to write that one-shot! And... maybe with an appearance by Perceptor and whoever is taking care of him? *hopes*
The only reason I can find is that I'm an idiot that needs to keep better track of the characters I'm using. Please forgive ( ... )
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I just watched the movie again. I'll be writing that one pretty soon. I'll even add Perceptor and his caretaker. *grins*
*cuddles Perceptor plushie* Thank you!
You're welcome! ^___^
Yeah; that be, what? About a 30+ chaptered fic?
Something like that. Oh God, just thinking about starting a monster that long gives me nightmares.
You should turn that into a little one-shot.
Working on it. Once I feel better, I'll tweak it a little bit and post it.
I wonder... those that die is Silent Hill... they're trapped there, aren't they?
I'm not really sure. But in this story they are.
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*does happy dance*
Something like that. Oh God, just thinking about starting a monster that long gives me nightmares.
I never like starting super long fics either, though I've got a lot of ideas for a few. I'm always afraid it'll just sit there, forever unfinished. Five chapters, I think, is the most I can handle. That might change though, if I find a plot that can keep my interest for that long.
Working on it. Once I feel better, I'll tweak it a little bit and post it.
I hope you feel better soon *calls First Aid*
I'm not really sure. But in this story they are.
That's so heartbreaking. Especially with Bluestreak. Forever, trapped in his worst nightmare...
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And here it is! Only Prowl for now, but the others are coming soon.
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