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Swoon-Inducing Smiles (BTOB AU)

May 25, 2013 18:06

Title: Swoon-Inducing Smiles
Author: leejaehwa7
Fandom: BTOB
Pairing: Ilhoon/Hyunsik
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ilhoon meets an unlikely guest while working as a cross-dressing hostess at a nightclub.

A/N: I really like when Ilhoon plays Ilsoon and I can’t help how good him and Hyunsik look together and this just had to happen…INSPIRATION

( Hyunsik closes the gap between them, lips gently meeting Ilhoon’s in a fleeting kiss. “I like who I am when I’m with you.” )

pairing: ilhoon/hyunsik, band: btob, rating: pg-13, #fanfiction

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leejaehwa7 May 25 2013, 23:45:58 UTC

I can't help it...when I see Hyunsik all I see is that ridiculous smile of his and it kills me...just like it kills Ilhoon >_<
and I think that is probably my favorite line...I can see it happening so clearly

seasaltcream May 26 2013, 06:17:08 UTC

First of all - Soooooo happy with this pairing. Everything Ilsik makes me go a little bit crazy! Second, I really like that you incorporated Ilsoon because I feel like that's such an interesting part of Ilhoon that isn't really written about as much as I would love ;; And also Hyunsik's eyesmile/wide smile/ everything about him makes me swoon. Love it.

leejaehwa7 May 26 2013, 13:53:21 UTC

hehehe...I think Ilsik make a lot of people crazy!
Ilsoon is amazing and beautiful and I love that part of Ilhoon...she's just screaming to come out sometimes and even if Ilhoon didn't like the whole dressing like a girl thing he played the part extremely well :D
And Hyunsik's smile is the only thing you can see on his face...it just takes over.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting <3

fingertrees May 26 2013, 16:30:02 UTC

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leejaehwa7 May 26 2013, 18:27:27 UTC

omg...I loved that part...Ilsoon was all "It's a burden for me to cover my chest because you are sitting there"...that boy is wonderful

thanks so much for reading...I'm glad you liked it ^___^

weerainbow May 28 2013, 00:31:48 UTC

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I reeeeeally enjoyed this! What a great story!! This must be my first time reading a BTOB fic but I've been getting to know and love the boys for a while. I adore your characterisations of Ilhoon and Hyunsik and the development of their characters as the story progressed. How you managed to fit so much growth in a oneshot story I don't know but I feel like I was on this big long journey with them wow.
I got tingles and everything reading this, you portrayed really great chemistry between the two all the way through and it left me almost teary at the end because I got the warm fuzzies for them :)
And ahh yes that swoon-inducing smile has got me more than a few times ;) Hyunsik was the first member of the group I paid real attention to in the beginning because of that smile of his. It's like the sun ( ... )

leejaehwa7 May 30 2013, 00:43:28 UTC

ASFASJFHKJSDHKJAF....I HAVE BTOB FEELS ( ... )

weerainbow May 31 2013, 00:18:41 UTC

I LOVE YOUR BTOB FEELS!!!! ;)

I told myself a long time ago I wouldn't enter another fandom fullstop but I keep finding gems like these guys that make me love them haha.

I don't think I have a definite favourite in the group yet but lately I've been noticing Changsub more and I really love his voice so he might come out top in a battle for bias spot. The boys are all a lot of fun though, the more I see of them the more I like them!

I'm off to check out your new fic now yay! ♥

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