Swoon-Inducing Smiles (BTOB AU)

May 25, 2013 18:06

Title: Swoon-Inducing Smiles
Author: leejaehwa7
Fandom: BTOB
Pairing: Ilhoon/Hyunsik
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ilhoon meets an unlikely guest while working as a cross-dressing hostess at a nightclub.

A/N: I really like when Ilhoon plays Ilsoon and I can’t help how good him and Hyunsik look together and this just had to happen…INSPIRATION

Hyunsik closes the gap between them, lips gently meeting Ilhoon’s in a fleeting kiss. “I like who I am when I’m with you.” )

pairing: ilhoon/hyunsik, band: btob, rating: pg-13, #fanfiction

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weerainbow May 28 2013, 00:31:48 UTC
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I reeeeeally enjoyed this! What a great story!! This must be my first time reading a BTOB fic but I've been getting to know and love the boys for a while. I adore your characterisations of Ilhoon and Hyunsik and the development of their characters as the story progressed. How you managed to fit so much growth in a oneshot story I don't know but I feel like I was on this big long journey with them wow.
I got tingles and everything reading this, you portrayed really great chemistry between the two all the way through and it left me almost teary at the end because I got the warm fuzzies for them :)
And ahh yes that swoon-inducing smile has got me more than a few times ;) Hyunsik was the first member of the group I paid real attention to in the beginning because of that smile of his. It's like the sun!
I never watched all the episodes of BTOB's show where they did the cross-dressing thing but I did catch a couple of parts and I remember thinking that Ilhoon was oh so good at playing his part!!! I can see why you would be inspired by that photo hehe.
Great story sweetie. I kinda want to read it all over again now even though I should be going to sleep. *hugs you*

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leejaehwa7 May 30 2013, 00:43:28 UTC
ASFASJFHKJSDHKJAF....I HAVE BTOB FEELS!!!!!

I told myself a while ago that I wouldn't enter another fandom for writing, but I couldn't help it. Ilsoon clawed her way out of my mind and demanded I write an Ilhoon/Hyunsik fic. How could I say no to her? She's super feisty and demanding! She knows what she wants.

I'm glad I could be the first BTOB fic for you. The boys are so talented and amazing and it's hard not to get sucked in by them. They have such a variety of guys in one group and they all work together so amazingly well.

I really like how this turned out and there's so much more I want to do with it. Maybe I'll add more...write a sequel or something.
Isn't Hyunsik so adorable. His smile just takes over his face and he just seems so innocent/genuine with his happiness...I love it! But my favorite is Ilhoon because he's just tries so hard and he's such a character. I also think Ilsoon is fabulous.

I hope you continue getting to know BTOB because they deserve so much more love. And as you already know, I working on another fic for them for a friend. We'll see how that one turns out. I hope it's as enjoyable as this one :D Thanks for being awesome as always <3

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weerainbow May 31 2013, 00:18:41 UTC
I LOVE YOUR BTOB FEELS!!!! ;)

I told myself a long time ago I wouldn't enter another fandom fullstop but I keep finding gems like these guys that make me love them haha.

I don't think I have a definite favourite in the group yet but lately I've been noticing Changsub more and I really love his voice so he might come out top in a battle for bias spot. The boys are all a lot of fun though, the more I see of them the more I like them!

I'm off to check out your new fic now yay! ♥

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