'Zoria' sounds like a sci-fi-ey name~
Zoria is my fanfiction character i came up with months ago. Sora, well everyone should know who he is. Anyway, this is about Zoria and Sora meeting and quickly falling in love. Btw, i hate Kairi, so i just had to make sure she don't get him. small yaoi.
Where to begin with this one...
No, I don't know who your OC is. Please don't expect me to on this big ol' Pit of fics here. Please do not assume your Sue that has glowing arrows and a wolf named "Alexander" is that recognizable.
"I just had to make sure she don't get him".
Well, okay. Sure. Making sure one fictional character doesn't decide, in a fanfic that -you're- writing and controlling the characters, does not hypothetically get together with another.
“Yes, ma’am.” Sora said with an attitude, “Bitch.” He muttered.
Zoria turned around, “What was that?!”
“Nothing.”
Riku whispered to Kairi, “Poor girl. They’ll be doing it by tonight.”
Then they heard a crash of a big ball of dark magic and flowers that’d been launched at them.
“What the hell? Flowers?!” Zoria asked.
It was none other than the famous gay couple. Xemnas (Mansex) and Marluxia (Rosy/Daisy/Petunia).
They realized that it was time to fight.
I got nothin' on this part. Any comments from the peanut gallery? Anyone?
Bueller? :B
ETA: Oh, sorry, I misread. Everyone shoulld know who Sora is in KH...-facepalm-
Nonetheless, I think I can hold other criticisms towards fair Zoria
Where to begin with this one...
No, I don't know who your OC is. Please don't expect me to on this big ol' Pit of fics here. Please do not assume your Sue that has glowing arrows and a wolf named "Alexander" is that recognizable.
"I just had to make sure she don't get him".
Well, okay. Sure. Making sure one fictional character doesn't decide, in a fanfic that -you're- writing and controlling the characters, does not hypothetically get together with another.
“Yes, ma’am.” Sora said with an attitude, “Bitch.” He muttered.
Zoria turned around, “What was that?!”
“Nothing.”
Riku whispered to Kairi, “Poor girl. They’ll be doing it by tonight.”
Then they heard a crash of a big ball of dark magic and flowers that’d been launched at them.
“What the hell? Flowers?!” Zoria asked.
It was none other than the famous gay couple. Xemnas (Mansex) and Marluxia (Rosy/Daisy/Petunia).
They realized that it was time to fight.
I got nothin' on this part. Any comments from the peanut gallery? Anyone?
Bueller? :B
ETA: Oh, sorry, I misread. Everyone shoulld know who Sora is in KH...-facepalm-
Nonetheless, I think I can hold other criticisms towards fair Zoria