'Zoria' sounds like a sci-fi-ey name~

[anthraxpretzels]

Zoria is my fanfiction character i came up with months ago. Sora, well everyone should know who he is. Anyway, this is about Zoria and Sora meeting and quickly falling in love. Btw, i hate Kairi, so i just had to make sure she don't get him. small yaoi.

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[cherrim]

It was none other than the famous gay couple. Xemnas (Mansex) and Marluxia (Rosy/Daisy/Petunia).

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I... wait... what? Just... what? Huh?

Why does this kind of crap still surprise me why am I not immune yeeeeet. ;_;

[shoshele04]

...Just when I think the Marluxia nicknames can't possibly get any worse.

But seriously. I don't even know where to start, it's all just so awful. Oh, and does this Sue really have glowing arrows or was that just some fun BS on your part? Cause if she does, that's such a freaking ripoff of Avatar.

...I'm not even gonna touch the other stuff.

[anthraxpretzels]

On your inquiry...

Sora was practicing moves with his keyblade when he was tripped by what appeared to a wolf.

“What the hell is that?!” he screamed.

He looked up to see who owned such an animal, when his eyes met Zoria’s.

“That happens to be my wolf. His name is Alexander.” the girl spoke.

“Alexander Wolf? That’s the crappiest name ev-,” he was interrupted by a glowing arrow that Zoria was aiming at him.

“Dare finish that sentence, weakling?” Zoria threatened.

I can't make this stuff up, peoples :V

[harpie_siren]

Rosy?
Daisy?
Petunia?

O_o

[anthraxpretzels]

I THINK MISTY FROM POKEMON HAD SISTERS NAMED LIKE THAT LOL

[shinzuku]

Awwww.

[ettezag]

No, I don't know who your OC is.

Haha no, they were referring to Sora with the sentence that I assume you are referring to.

This Zoria OC though, sounds like they were trying to make a strong character and just ended up with a dumb bitch.

[anthraxpretzels]

Woops, I totally missed that first read-through XD

/needs to stop quadruple-tasking

Yeah, I suppose they assumed that if a character was physically strong, they didn't have to actually...yknow', put effort into making said OC likeable :\

[ettezag]

Or they could have been trying to go for that "strong and dangerous" personality, and 'dangerous' got mistranslated to 'utter bitch.'

[anthraxpretzels]

Right, right.

Somewhat skeevy also what with trying to make moves on Sora within five minutes of meeting him.

[cats_fiend]

Mary-Sues make me very sad. :c

Riku whispered to Kairi, “Poor girl. They’ll be doing it by tonight.”

Wha...wha...WHAT? Wait. Why is she a "poor girl" and why does Riku assume this-- *stops* Argh, such pain. DX