Note to self: Do not Send Riku Tokyo Mew Mew Manga as a gag gift
A couple of things, Author...
Firstly, if you use a name-smush pairing in which half is the name of your OC, please try agin. I don't have the brain-power yet to realize "Rika=RIku/'Olivia'" yet. Sorry
Secondly, It'd be nice to have a bit of context as to why Riku would be spying on your most likely self-insert catgirl OC with "dripping black hair, fair skin, and sexy body" in the shower, and in response to her screaming slamming her against a wall, and going "Damn you’re hot"
Thirdly, I really don't see why your friends would review using your account when you've turned anon reviews on. Nice try.
And Fourth, "kittenish" is not a word.
Keep trying,
-Me
P.S: "he had her where he wanted her and she couldn’t do anything about it" is not particularly romantic or humorous. It's kind of creepy, actually. Please stop trying to pass that off as cutesy.
Firstly, if you use a name-smush pairing in which half is the name of your OC, please try agin. I don't have the brain-power yet to realize "Rika=RIku/'Olivia'" yet. Sorry
Secondly, It'd be nice to have a bit of context as to why Riku would be spying on your most likely self-insert catgirl OC with "dripping black hair, fair skin, and sexy body" in the shower, and in response to her screaming slamming her against a wall, and going "Damn you’re hot"
Thirdly, I really don't see why your friends would review using your account when you've turned anon reviews on. Nice try.
And Fourth, "kittenish" is not a word.
Keep trying,
-Me
P.S: "he had her where he wanted her and she couldn’t do anything about it" is not particularly romantic or humorous. It's kind of creepy, actually. Please stop trying to pass that off as cutesy.