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I long for a good, epic KH adventure fic, and so where else do I go, but the Pit? Hell, I'm even fine with a mild-Sue [Note: mild, not extra-spicy] main character as long as its well written and the Sue doesn't get too out of control. I do like OCs, after all.
And, hey, there's even some stuff that looks good. But. Oh, ficcer. I wanted to read your fic, it seemed like it had a cool plot and the dialogue was well-written. I gave it a try, I did. But...it was in script form. Now, maybe you were just trying to keep to the in-game cutscenes, but it really, really doesn't work. Also, it's not...really allowed according to the FF.net rules. Of course, it seemed well-written otherwise, so you escaped reporting, but. I couldn't read beyond the first chapter. I'm sorry. I'm just not jonesing that hard. Yet.
Ah, well. I'll keep hoping. Recs will be met with great love.
And, hey, there's even some stuff that looks good. But. Oh, ficcer. I wanted to read your fic, it seemed like it had a cool plot and the dialogue was well-written. I gave it a try, I did. But...it was in script form. Now, maybe you were just trying to keep to the in-game cutscenes, but it really, really doesn't work. Also, it's not...really allowed according to the FF.net rules. Of course, it seemed well-written otherwise, so you escaped reporting, but. I couldn't read beyond the first chapter. I'm sorry. I'm just not jonesing that hard. Yet.
Ah, well. I'll keep hoping. Recs will be met with great love.