Here we go again...
Dear fanfic author:
First and foremost, thanks for writing Xemnas/Saïx. It's really quite an amazing pairing if it'll well done.
Okayyy... so Saïx calls Xemnas "Xemnas-dono"? That's a bit weird...
and then Saïx went fluttery and weak. And then started whispering Japanese.
Fanbrat Japanese in the middle of a sex scene is like when Razer aired Samurai Champloo in Japanese. Funny at first from the wtfness, and then annoying and frustrating.
Also, I doubt Saïx would never think "Heh...sexily."
Saïx =/= school girl. Xemnas =/= sentimental and kind.
What makes that pairing so great is the desperation, the anger. Not a weak fluttery Saïx collapsing again his master "Xemnas-dono"'s chest.
Where the heck did that "giddy-teenagers-in-love" part come from?
Augh.
No love, Alice.
First and foremost, thanks for writing Xemnas/Saïx. It's really quite an amazing pairing if it'll well done.
Okayyy... so Saïx calls Xemnas "Xemnas-dono"? That's a bit weird...
and then Saïx went fluttery and weak. And then started whispering Japanese.
Fanbrat Japanese in the middle of a sex scene is like when Razer aired Samurai Champloo in Japanese. Funny at first from the wtfness, and then annoying and frustrating.
Also, I doubt Saïx would never think "Heh...sexily."
Saïx =/= school girl. Xemnas =/= sentimental and kind.
What makes that pairing so great is the desperation, the anger. Not a weak fluttery Saïx collapsing again his master "Xemnas-dono"'s chest.
Where the heck did that "giddy-teenagers-in-love" part come from?
Augh.
No love, Alice.