[fic]Retribution Epilogue

May 14, 2014 02:14

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

jamie310 June 19 2014, 07:32:23 UTC
Bravo!!!!!

Reply

kajornwan June 21 2014, 14:53:09 UTC
Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it.

Reply

jamie310 July 22 2014, 12:57:39 UTC
Oh, l ' m sorry,
I wrote my comment between the comments from May 2014 (first time posting something somewhere, sorry. . . )
I wanted to add: beside readers, who will discouver this in the future (like me, who discouvered your fic and viewfinder itself during the last weeks, althrough yours is written in 2011), I think there will be many hidden readers, enjoying your stories without commenting anything... (I'm such a hidden reader, less interacting in the internet like I do right now, just wanting to let you know... )
One day I'd like to send you some drawings.
I was so relieved of finding people, who like the Feilong\Mikhael-couple best. It's the same with me too (after the myself&feilong-couple of course... hihi), cause I assume, there will be many people, who like akihito&asami best (I'm not very interested in them).
I'd like to thank you so much for this work which costs me sleepless nights...
S

Reply

jamie310 July 22 2014, 13:05:59 UTC
Ah, and I hope Mikhael will find his memories back one day, he should be albe to realize what he had fought for... : ) ...

Reply

kajornwan August 2 2014, 23:49:33 UTC
No worries. I replied to that one up there too. Well for what it's worth I do hope there will always be MxF fans around!

Reply

Simply gorgeous :) jamie310 July 24 2014, 17:44:43 UTC
Dear Faye ( ... )

Reply

Re: Simply gorgeous :) kajornwan August 3 2014, 00:08:00 UTC
Hello Elenora,

It's good to see you here really! I'm happy to hear that you think these two chapters are still touching as ever. I have a feeling a lot of people are disappointed about the ending but I guess it couldn't be helped given what I've done to them. I'm quite incapable of writing a straightforward happy ending really as I don't believe in one. Happy ending 'ends' the story of life that should never end until they die. It's unsatisfying, but I think that is how life makes you want to keep going. And of course, it keeps the possibility of sequels opened for when I become a housewife with nothing else to do but write XD

So in that way Fei proved that his feelings are quite as sincere as Mikhail's :)I'm happy you picked up on that really. The point of CI was to make Fei grow and learn to love, moving away from his past and understanding what he wants in life. And this was one of the things that show that he has learned to love. Plus he has witnessed first hand what happens to Mikhail when he remembers. I think he too doesn't ( ... )

Reply


Leave a comment

Up