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that_oneill_guy in jump100

[Whistle!] Imperfection

Apr 12, 2005 19:17

Title: Imperfection
Author: O'Neill
Series: Whistle!
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Challenge: Tournament

( Imperfection )

challenge 04: tournaments, series: whistle

Comments 11

aishuu April 13 2005, 04:53:09 UTC

*just dies laughing* I was wondering if this was an AU until it clicked. Nice work.

that_oneill_guy April 14 2005, 19:11:13 UTC

That's just the reaction I was hoping for, so thanks for letting me know it worked. *g* Good God, a W! AU featuring clumsy!Mizuno. The possibilities are endless.

aishuu April 14 2005, 19:36:30 UTC

Do NOT start me! I could just imagine how that would change things...

that_oneill_guy April 15 2005, 05:20:01 UTC

SERIOUSLY. Like, Mizuno going to Sakura Jousui is no longer an act of rebellion but a necessity (he just doesn't have what it takes to make it at Musashi no Mori), and he sticks with the soccer club only because he hopes to earn his father's approval one day. Then he meets Shou, who helps him to see that he can play soccer because he WANTS to, and-- *gets bricked*

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2naonh3_cl2 April 13 2005, 12:24:57 UTC

*grins like mad* that was great. ^_^ Bowling...bwah ha ha ha!

that_oneill_guy April 14 2005, 19:13:03 UTC

Glad you liked it. >] Somehow, I like the idea of Mizuno being a lame bowler.

2naonh3_cl2 April 14 2005, 20:48:13 UTC

I can seriously picture his face as he gets another gutter ball...-_-;;; And somehow, no matter what, Sho still looks like an eager puppy, "Yeah, Mizuno-kun, you can do it." *blinks HUGE eyes at Mizuno*

lucathia_rykatu April 15 2005, 04:59:09 UTC

XD So cute. Mizuno with no ball control? Hehe, wait! It's bowling~

I suck at bowling. -_- I sympathize with Mizuno. (laughs)

I love the lines of all four characters. :)

that_oneill_guy April 15 2005, 05:23:13 UTC

Thanks. :) I thought it'd be interesting to see Mizuno playing a sport he doesn't, y'know, own. And I could totally see Shige using it to his advantage.

nataku_kun April 22 2005, 12:11:27 UTC

XD That's so cute! Well, I think it is anyway. Hah hah hah, Fuwa the genius hah hah, the "Crusher" Fuwa strikes again XD Nah. Yeah, Mizuno and Kaza stand no chance against Shige and Fuwa paired together, coz, let's face it, they would have so much more skill than the other two XD