Shige/Koyama and Pin ficlets
Title: Art Appreciation
Pairing: Shige/Koyama
Rating: PG?
Author's Notes: A little comment-fic I made in darkeyedwolf 's journal after looking at this picture for far too long, fixed up slightly for public consumption. Actually, just read the thread (and my ghetto translation of the picture) first, everything makes more sense in context. Even this.
( Laboriously Koyama paints a collar around his own neck, the leash in Shige's hand, then caps the red polish with a flourish. )
Pairing: Shige/Koyama
Rating: PG?
Author's Notes: A little comment-fic I made in darkeyedwolf 's journal after looking at this picture for far too long, fixed up slightly for public consumption. Actually, just read the thread (and my ghetto translation of the picture) first, everything makes more sense in context. Even this.
( Laboriously Koyama paints a collar around his own neck, the leash in Shige's hand, then caps the red polish with a flourish. )
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Yamapi and Jin need an equivalent leash photoshoot for someone to write about.
fkjsfksdjkdk "ten photoshoots TAY*J never had." ♥
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OH MY GOD. XD WHAT ALCOHOL WILL IT TAKE TO GET YOU TO FINISH? I'm a barmaid, I can provide!
fkjsfksdjkdk "ten photoshoots TAY*J never had." ♥
...You know what you need to do. ♥ Finish the ninjas, then get cracking on the photoshoot fic. This could be the beginning of something beautiful! :D
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lkajsdl;fkasdf The Koyato is killing me because they are so them in all their dorky-yet-still-smarter-than-the-likes-of-Pin glory and we have flaily Koyama with wry and exasperated Shige who still plays along because it's KOYATO and then is aggressive and alkjsdlfkjasdf. OKAY HELLO I LOVE YOU.
.........ANNNNNNNNNNND THEN THERE WAS PIN WITH JIN'S LEOPARD LEOTARD. I MAKE A GOOD SLAVE, I PROMISE. I DON'T TAKE UP MUCH ROOM AND YOU CAN JUST FEED ME PORN. :D :D :D :D
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HAHAHA, WHAT?! Why do I feel like I've just been scammed or something? XD;
*flails at you* Omg, thankyou thankyou thankyou. But did you see the way I cleverly ninja-ed out of writing porn in both fics? You would starve with me, and it would be a tragedy. :D
We should double-team darkeyedwolf and make her write porn for us. >:D
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Seriously I yearn for good Koyato and it is so had to find and HERE IT IS WITH THEM DRAWING ON PHOTOS WITH NAIL POLISH.
Anyway, you're just jealous because you don't even have a cat." He looks smug.
“Single-lids!”
“Wagahai.”
This exchange had me cracking up. HAHAHAHAHA SHIGE AND HIS INVISIBLE CAT WILL NEVER STOP BEING FUNNY. Beautiful. XD
Gah, and then it was poised ready to turn into smut or at least something close and they just had to be in public and spoil it. Hmph. I think you should write a sequel. With porn. I actually I think you should write more Koyato, period.
OH AND ALSO THAT PIN. Right. XD I ADORE JIN, LEOPARD LEOTARDS AND ALL. Mmmm. You can write some more of that, too, sure.
IN CONCLUSION: more is better. yup. ♥!!
just one tiny tiny punctuation nitpick that I only point out because it was fairly consistent - when someone says something, like for example:
"I think there's still something missing." Koyama declares
that should be a comma inside the quotes instead of a period.
".. ( ... )
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I agree completely on the 'more Koyato!' thing (though er, possibly not on the 'me writing it' thing, because. well. *performance anxiety* XD;). I am heartbroken that there is not more Koyato, when we have journal entries from Koyama talking about how Shige wanted them to share the same bed in LA and didn't because he tends to hug things in the night. Where is the fic, fandom?!
Akjsdfjkdf, no, thankyou for pointing it out, I always manage to make at least one tiny, stupid error when I write fic. ^^; I'm always grateful when people point out mistakes so I can fix them. *edits*
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The first one! Wonderful!
The second one! ILU ♥
I would LOVE to see more from you.
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Thankyou so much! ♥ ♥ ♥
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