Shige/Koyama and Pin ficlets
Title: Art Appreciation
Pairing: Shige/Koyama
Rating: PG?
Author's Notes: A little comment-fic I made in darkeyedwolf 's journal after looking at this picture for far too long, fixed up slightly for public consumption. Actually, just read the thread (and my ghetto translation of the picture) first, everything makes more sense in context. Even this.
( Laboriously Koyama paints a collar around his own neck, the leash in Shige's hand, then caps the red polish with a flourish. )
Pairing: Shige/Koyama
Rating: PG?
Author's Notes: A little comment-fic I made in darkeyedwolf 's journal after looking at this picture for far too long, fixed up slightly for public consumption. Actually, just read the thread (and my ghetto translation of the picture) first, everything makes more sense in context. Even this.
( Laboriously Koyama paints a collar around his own neck, the leash in Shige's hand, then caps the red polish with a flourish. )
Seriously I yearn for good Koyato and it is so had to find and HERE IT IS WITH THEM DRAWING ON PHOTOS WITH NAIL POLISH.
Anyway, you're just jealous because you don't even have a cat." He looks smug.
“Single-lids!”
“Wagahai.”
This exchange had me cracking up. HAHAHAHAHA SHIGE AND HIS INVISIBLE CAT WILL NEVER STOP BEING FUNNY. Beautiful. XD
Gah, and then it was poised ready to turn into smut or at least something close and they just had to be in public and spoil it. Hmph. I think you should write a sequel. With porn. I actually I think you should write more Koyato, period.
OH AND ALSO THAT PIN. Right. XD I ADORE JIN, LEOPARD LEOTARDS AND ALL. Mmmm. You can write some more of that, too, sure.
IN CONCLUSION: more is better. yup. ♥!!
just one tiny tiny punctuation nitpick that I only point out because it was fairly consistent - when someone says something, like for example:
"I think there's still something missing." Koyama declares
that should be a comma inside the quotes instead of a period.
"...missing," Koyama declares.
"You're just jealous," he sulks.
I hope you don't mind me pointing it out! It in no way detracts from the overall quality of the fic! ♥ ♥ ♥
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I agree completely on the 'more Koyato!' thing (though er, possibly not on the 'me writing it' thing, because. well. *performance anxiety* XD;). I am heartbroken that there is not more Koyato, when we have journal entries from Koyama talking about how Shige wanted them to share the same bed in LA and didn't because he tends to hug things in the night. Where is the fic, fandom?!
Akjsdfjkdf, no, thankyou for pointing it out, I always manage to make at least one tiny, stupid error when I write fic. ^^; I'm always grateful when people point out mistakes so I can fix them. *edits*
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