Comments | jcrgirl: Redemption Chapter 16B

jcrgirl

Redemption Chapter 16B

Jul 26, 2013 07:02

Jensen’s eyes snapped back into focus and he tore them away from where he’d been staring at the damning double doors at the opposite end of the waiting room. From the entrance came the twins, running around and between the hurt and ill patients still needing to be seen, their arms extended and faces glossy with flowing tears. He slipped from his ( Read more... )

mpreg, abuse, j2, redemption, non-con, hurt/comfort, imogen's bunny ranch

Comments 52

frostfalcon July 26 2013, 11:38:50 UTC

Another well written and compelling chapter, I'm glad Jared looks like he's going to be ok and I'm still hoping that Timothy eventually gets exactly what he so richly deserves... Thanks for sharing!

jcrgirl September 22 2013, 22:58:05 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and sticking with me. I can promise that Timothy will get his just desserts, I just can't promise who will be dishing it out ;)

rifle53 July 26 2013, 12:58:44 UTC

Oh good lord. This story is killing me (in a good way) I can't wait for more!

jcrgirl September 22 2013, 22:59:08 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad that if it's killing you, you're enjoying it!

obsessed_north July 26 2013, 13:35:54 UTC

EXCUSE THE USE OF CAPSLOCK BUT MY EMOTIONS CANNOT BE CONTAINED ( ... )

jcrgirl September 22 2013, 23:01:48 UTC

The use of capslock is perfectly acceptable from time to time. Sorry this is so late of a reply.

I'm really glad you liked the chapter I was concerned it was too over the top. Nice catch with The Fugitive allusion. I think you were the only one that caught it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I love to hear how the chapters are received.

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jcrgirl September 22 2013, 23:02:11 UTC

Yep! He just doesn't realize it yet!

slf630 July 26 2013, 15:26:07 UTC

It's so hard to read through the tears but I managed. This was amazing. God, I'm so glad that Jared and the baby are ok, at least for now. I can't wait for them to find Timothy. So proud of the twins for running like Jared told them and calling Jensen. Such sweet, brave little boys. The beginning did have me laughing - the sheriff cuffing Jensen because he wouldn't stop pacing was priceless. Thanks so much for the update and I hope RL gets better. :) Can't wait for more.

jcrgirl September 22 2013, 23:03:34 UTC

RL is finally settling down so maybe I won't be so long in replying and updating. Thank you for sticking with me and for commenting. It's such a pleasure to receive comments from the people who's writing I admire.