Title: Off-Limits Author: marishaten Words: 249 Prompt: Brewed or Brood Universe: Canon Rating: K Warning: Language Summary: Situations differ but his sentiments remain the same.
Toukajin! Oh my goodness thats a blast from the past! I havent seen most of the series in a very long times so it took me a looooong moment to remember and figure out what was going on. I really need to re-watch the earlier episodes lol.
Anyways, I take it this is a moment from behind the scenes of the episode Kagome was kidnapped and stuck in the peach bath to...er... marinate? A very powerful moment. Inuyasha is so very protective of Kagome, that I can only imagine the fury and fear he felt when he saw her clothes in their enemies hands. I very much enjoyed your portrayel of the scene as well as the jerk back into past characters. I was grinning from ear to ear despite the serious events. :) Great Job!
Oh thank you so much for the wonderful review! It always feels lovely to get some feedback, especially one as thoughtful as yours! Yeah, it's the selfsame Toukajin that you mentioned. I quite liked that story, especially for the Inu-Kag interaction and when I was looking through the manga the other day, the idea came to my head. I'm really glad you have enjoyed it.
OH it's nice to see something like this! I love the moments like these that you write, when I think about the character and I have the Ah HA moment. You have such gorgeous writing, I always love to see the ideas you sprout since they are so original! I know it's been awhile now since you joined the communities, but I'm so happy that you did! I would have missed all of this fabulous writing and your portrayal of Inuyasha here was spot on! I can't imagine how he was feeling when he saw the clothes, but you captivated those emotions so well! Awesome job!
Thank you so very much! I always look forward to your reviews - they are so detailed and really, encourage me A LOT to write! I'm still not back in full swing into writing, but your words make me feel like doing it more and more. I'm really glad you found the depiction plausible...IMHO, this chapter shows some intense Inu-Kag moments and I always loved it, especially after that weird business with Kikyou. Glad you liked it, too!
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Anyways, I take it this is a moment from behind the scenes of the episode Kagome was kidnapped and stuck in the peach bath to...er... marinate? A very powerful moment. Inuyasha is so very protective of Kagome, that I can only imagine the fury and fear he felt when he saw her clothes in their enemies hands. I very much enjoyed your portrayel of the scene as well as the jerk back into past characters. I was grinning from ear to ear despite the serious events. :) Great Job!
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Aw.. This is an omen.. Must rewatch InuYasha..
as always, your writing remains par excellence.. :)
was literally rewatching the scene in my head through this.. :)
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Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm really glad you liked the interpretation.
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