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OK so this a fairly old fic. Wrote it forever ago. Enjoy ^_~.
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Rating: Nc-17
I think it's still untitled....but if anyone knows if I titled it or not, just comment.
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Title: Untitled
Rating: Nc-17
I think it's still untitled....but if anyone knows if I titled it or not, just comment.
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I was completely engrossed from start to finish. Your style is amazingly fresh, evocative and accessible. The occasional spelling or grammatical error just adds to the raw and earthy point-of-view perspective you've established here. Trey may not be the brightest kid on the block, but he's street smart and he knows what he likes (and, obviously, how to go about getting it!). At the same time, some of the language you use is incredibly evocative, fresh and startlingly beautiful, without being pretentious or lofty at all. For instance I've never heard a better description of fact than the "leaking cock". The narrative moves at a cracking pace rather than dwelling on distracting exposition and scene-setting: the great thing about fanfics is that, from having seen the respective show or film, we know what the characters and their houses look ( ... )
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And I totally agree with you about the "direct" writer bit, I like to be describtive and all, but with this fic I really wanted to focus on Trey.
I'm really glad you liked it, its always a great feeling when someone leaves a review, it makes be want to write.
As, far as things I've written go, there are I think only 2 OC fics, a couple of Numb3rs, some queer as folk, a black hawk down and some original. But they aren't in my journal ^^;; (I mainly post in community) But if you want them just send me your e-mail and I can get them to you.
Again, thank you so much! You've made my day.
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