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[dtkokoro]

OK so this a fairly old fic. Wrote it forever ago. Enjoy ^_~.
Title: Untitled
Rating: Nc-17

I think it's still untitled....but if anyone knows if I titled it or not, just comment.

Comments

High praise and gratitude

[vicellious]

OH. MY. GOD. This story is just unbelievably good. In a single evening it has catapulted up the ranks of my all time favourite slash stories to rest high up there amongst Lucy's best Forsaken fics.

I was completely engrossed from start to finish. Your style is amazingly fresh, evocative and accessible. The occasional spelling or grammatical error just adds to the raw and earthy point-of-view perspective you've established here. Trey may not be the brightest kid on the block, but he's street smart and he knows what he likes (and, obviously, how to go about getting it!). At the same time, some of the language you use is incredibly evocative, fresh and startlingly beautiful, without being pretentious or lofty at all. For instance I've never heard a better description of fact than the "leaking cock". The narrative moves at a cracking pace rather than dwelling on distracting exposition and scene-setting: the great thing about fanfics is that, from having seen the respective show or film, we know what the characters and their houses look

Re: High praise and gratitude

[dtkokoro]

*is in awe* Wow, no one had ever said so much about any thing I've ever written. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, the whole grammarical errors were because I didn't seek out a beta, mainy because, I'm a lazy writer.

And I totally agree with you about the "direct" writer bit, I like to be describtive and all, but with this fic I really wanted to focus on Trey.

I'm really glad you liked it, its always a great feeling when someone leaves a review, it makes be want to write.

As, far as things I've written go, there are I think only 2 OC fics, a couple of Numb3rs, some queer as folk, a black hawk down and some original. But they aren't in my journal ^^;; (I mainly post in community) But if you want them just send me your e-mail and I can get them to you.

Again, thank you so much! You've made my day.

Re: High praise and gratitude

[vicellious]

Hey you deserve it buddy. If I made your day, you made my night (and many more to come, through re-readinsg, I'm sure) so I guess we're even

Re: High praise and gratitude

[dtkokoro]

That is so cool. I been in a bit of a slump lately. And the fic is Daph/Hunter (it was a odd pairing challange)

Re: High praise and gratitude

[vicellious]

Thanks for flicking me your fics. :) I look forward to reading them, however it may take a little while. I'll be sure to let you know how I go and pass on any feedback as they come.

Daph - is that Justin's female friend? If yes, then you're right, they're a little weird, but I still thing it could work.

Re: High praise and gratitude

[dtkokoro]

Yeah, Daph is Justin's friend. It was the first het thing I ever wrote.

Re: High praise and gratitude

[vicellious]

Eww. Het. :P

I'll still read it though. Just for sexy Hunter, mind you. :)

Re: High praise and gratitude

[dtkokoro]

^_^ Well, it was the cue_the_pulse april's fool challange thing, where we had a weird pairing.