Make into a Story?

[un_derscores]

Okay. I wrote 7 drabbles for the Songfic Drabble Challenge and posted then in various communities. Everyone has told me to make the last one into something more. I'm kind of on the fence about it; i think it would be fun to do, and i kind of have a story line, but i just want to get some other opinions on it. The drabble in question is the last one, entitled "Sleep".

Feel free to share your thoughts about what i should do with it or just what you think of all of them by leaving me a comment on my journal.

here's the link