Make into a Story?

[un_derscores]

Okay. I wrote 7 drabbles for the Songfic Drabble Challenge and posted then in various communities. Everyone has told me to make the last one into something more. I'm kind of on the fence about it; i think it would be fun to do, and i kind of have a story line, but i just want to get some other opinions on it. The drabble in question is the last one

Comments

[genagirl]

If you have a story I say go for it, but otherwise it is perfect the way it is. (But I would love to read more).

[namasteyoga]

I think the problem with "Sleep" is that it isn't a complete thought. As mentioned in the thread on what makes a drabble work, it needs to be something that is contained within the 100 words. "Sleep" feels more like what you wrote there was a prologue to something else, so I can see why people want to know what happens next.

If, as Gena noted, you have more that could tie into it, I'd say use the drabble as a prologue, introduce your story with it.