Comments | hikaruxkaoru: Bouquet of Freesia, PG-13

wind_songs in hikaruxkaoru

Bouquet of Freesia, PG-13

Sep 18, 2006 18:39

My first OKHC fanfic and my first general fic in a long, long time. Please r&r. Feedback is <3 ( Read more... )

Comments 19

splinteredfate September 19 2006, 02:18:45 UTC

;a; ♥ Oh, that made me feel warmer. I stopped writing twinnies a few weeks ago because they depressed me (they meaning Haruhi&them)... but they are still my favorite pair to see written in this fashion. Oh it was sweet. It was a bit avoidant, but that's so very twin-like and ♥. I missed twins.

There are a few typos (I think there is a 'bbut' up there somewhere) but other than that it was adorable ♥

If this kind of read keeps up, I might be convinced to try my hand at the lovely devils again XD

wind_songs September 19 2006, 03:25:46 UTC

I know. I like Haruhi as much as the next person, but I like HxK more. XD XD XD

O.O *embarassed* sorry about the typos, thanks for catching it for me. It's all corrected.

Try your hand at the lovely devils! There is never too much. :p And you know they'd want you to.

purajo September 19 2006, 02:39:06 UTC

AWwwww.... so much warmth and fluffiness! i love this.... i'm also tickled pink with the fact that Hikaru brought Kaoru flowers, cos there's something so indescribably cute about that...

wind_songs September 19 2006, 03:26:30 UTC

lol. I'm still trying to figure out the characters completely and thought I'd test out this flower-giving Hikaru. I might change them in future fics. XD

_superherogirl_ September 19 2006, 02:51:00 UTC

*wishes she had an icon of the twins, but tamaki will do for now. >.>;*

Thank you, you have officially made me melt into a big puddle of goopy fag haggyness. *sniffle* That was beyond cute! Oh... who needs dirty smut all the time! *sniffles some more*

Either way, I just have to say this fic was SOOO adorable! :333

wind_songs September 19 2006, 03:27:21 UTC

Tamaki is <3 too!

awww... you're welcome.. lol... there are times when dirty smut is what you need, but when that romantic in you is itching, you've gotta scratch no?

thanks!

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wind_songs September 19 2006, 18:24:16 UTC

thanks!

omg... I love your icon!

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wind_songs September 19 2006, 19:27:45 UTC

lol... mine is from cynicalshark It's just so true I had to have it.

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wind_songs September 19 2006, 18:21:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! And decided to join the hxk ship! We're a welcoming group and getting bigger by the moment.