She Doesn't Want You

Aug 16, 2006 14:59

Team: The Order of the Phoenix

Challenge: Alternating Appearances, Second Person POV

Word Count: 2 x 100 (yep... track and field event...)

Characters: Snape, Hermione and Ron

Notes: Polyjuice (again) and some defeat for Mr Weasley

It was as bad as the first time he'd taken it.  Gryffindors and Slytherins just weren't supposed to mix…

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charmed310, 2nd person pov challenge, altering appearances challenge

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Comments 18

droxy August 16 2006, 23:06:52 UTC
Oh poor Ron....LOL

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charmed310 August 16 2006, 23:10:41 UTC
It hurt my heart... because I really love Ron...

Thanks! :D

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hogwartshoney August 16 2006, 23:09:46 UTC
Boo, you whore!

Okay, you know I had to do it... but really .... good plot!!! Really! and a moment of clarity for our poor Ron. I like the 'Gryffindors and Slytherins just weren't supposed to mix...' bit, many meanings there! ;o) I like it, so boo.

whore

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charmed310 August 16 2006, 23:13:12 UTC
......

Thanks!... I'd written it before I thought about it and then I laughed at what it meant... hehe!

biatch

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snapeophile August 17 2006, 01:14:28 UTC
I hope you've just been reading Plaidpooka's The Price of Madness, dear, or we will need to wash your mouth out with old fashioned lye soap for calling dear, sweet, innocent Charmed310 a wh*re! >:(

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hogwartshoney August 17 2006, 01:27:43 UTC
Pook has indeed corrupted me...... but it was Nikki who first used those words.
Innocent - she AIN'T !

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snapeophile August 16 2006, 23:41:47 UTC
Nice one, charmed! So cute about Ron having the advantage over Snape in the hair department. :-) Maybe now, Ron'll take the hint!

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charmed310 August 17 2006, 00:19:15 UTC
Thanks 'phile :D

I'd originally put in "but the nose... not so much..." but I had too many words.

My poor Ronniekins... I really do adore him, but he HAD to learn!

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snapeophile August 17 2006, 12:14:21 UTC
Hey, Charmed, this is off-topic, but...that's never stopped me before! ;-)

I absolutely adore this smiling Sevvie icon of yours. Could you/would you share it with me? snapeophilex@yahoo.com if you would. Thanks, K

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imhilien August 17 2006, 01:51:42 UTC
Ooh... it's easy to feel a bit sorry for Ron in this one (despite him impersonating Snape).

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charmed310 August 17 2006, 02:10:58 UTC
yes... it is... and it still hurts me to think that I made him drink Polyjuice again... LOL

Thanks hun :D

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snapeophile August 17 2006, 12:17:15 UTC
OMG--this Harry/Ron Yule Ball icon is a scream! Are you in competition with your cousin for the 'best icon of the year' award???

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charmed310 August 17 2006, 21:35:09 UTC
oh yeah... DIED when I saw that one.

I'm the one that goes around on google and yahoo to find all my puctures and icons, and she's got all the LJ buddies that MAKE the icons... so yeah... I think we've got some good ones :D

I found THIS one the other night on knightmare_shad's LJ and CRIED with laughter!

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acadia_elle August 20 2006, 16:07:01 UTC
Well, now Ron knows... and you portrayed a very graceful Ron accpetance of Hermione's happiness. Well done!

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charmed310 August 20 2006, 22:24:12 UTC
thank you :D

Well, he'd had some time to come around to the idea... so he wasn't too upset. Now he's going to have several drinks in the Leaky Cauldron with Harry.

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